What do you think about this song i wrote (not finished)?

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You'll always have a special place in my heart
And nothing will ever tear us apart 
Your some sort of a dream (a good one too)
And we make a great team (just me and you)
We have each other all the time
And everyday i have you on my mind(hold)

Best friends forever,Were always together
Just me and you,It's just me and you
We can have fun,While running in the sun
It's me and you

We can go anywhere,Far or near
Just as long as your here
Ride ar bikes,or just take a hike
Sing some songs, or just dance along

Best friends forever,Were always together
Just me and you,It's just me and you
We can have fun,While running in the sun
It's me and you

If your not here with me then what will i do
I'd be crying all night missing you

If you can think of what would go great after this and a title you'll get best answer
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chocolateluver · Accepted Answer

that sounds great. i bet if you sang it and recorded it it would sound so amazing, it might even be on the top ten! :) good luck.

*Boredy · Answer

I kinda like it at parts, but overall your rhyme too much.
I dont like the line:
"We can have fun,While running in the sun"
Its sounds forced and wierd :S
But it could be good...
Possible song titles:
``place in my heart``
``Always together``

Anonymous · Answer

Just so you know, that isn't a song. A song is set to music. The correct question should be, "how do you like me poem?, I am writing for a song..."

Secretive... · Answer

that's really good.

How about "best friends"

? · Answer

it is really good, but sorry I'm not good with that kind of thing...

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