So, Okay, I've been busy...Do you have time to comment another?

Jonni I really enjoyed the first stanza... and the energy that you captured... by changing your pattern... in the second and third stanza/s you lost a bit of that charge...

Feeling electric,

super charged,

running on turbo...

Feeling electric,

no task too difficult,

no journey to long...

Feeling electric,

enthusiasm pours out,

like sweat, sheer joy...I'm alive.

Thanks for the boost!

Temari

Feeling neon...feeling fine! lol

A nice fast paced poem. Not too much to read into it just the staccato

pace of delivery and the refrain of feeling electric. I am going now to take a vitamin pill!

This is good!

It got me a little more energized even with a slow song playing in the background of my computer.

light and beautiful, as usual!

Edit : Feeling Electric , 'd be a cool title.

Cool.

I totally get this, its sweeett.