How does this conclusion sound...?

In summation, “Charles” by Shirley Jackson was a well written tale. By describing Laurie’s thoughts, appearence, and mannerisms, The author gave her audience great insight into the personality of the character in the story..

Don't use the phrase all in all, it's a cliche.

And after the word looks, put a comma and delete the and.

In summation, the short story, “Charles” by Shirley Jackson very well-written. By explaining Laurie’s words, looks, clothing, and overall behavior, Jackson helped the reader further understand Laurie’s character and personality.

(I stole in summation from the guy above me, but it's just an example. Be sure to use something else other than all in all.)

Hmm, heres a few pointers (as I'm guessing you don't just want people to say "yes that's good")

- Start with "in conclusion"

- Possibly Don't state the book again (you've already talked about it for the whole essay - maybe just state the author and what he/she does)

- Explain how well the book appeal to you (after "very well-writen")

- Relate it back to the opening question

That's about it...it seems a little short for a conclusion so try expanding it!

perchance u ought to restate the theisis actuality and then : This statment leads to my conception that the individuals who commit against the law ought to get what they deserve earlier they commit yet another crime.

you don't have clue do you? read it again and you'll be able to put together a sentence with some substance........