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Smiles what do you think?
SMILES
Smiles on faces
In different places
Tenderness seen or
one that's mean
One that hides
behind the disguise of
of debauchery of guise
A smile of surprise
is seen in the eyes!
Thanks traveling yes definately a typo, thanks for noticing!
Thanks all, sorry there must be troll lurking around giving thumbs down, it wasn't from me, I appreciate all answers!
11 Answers
- 1 decade agoFavorite Answer
MB,,, I do believe you are onto something here ( as opposed to being on something )
If I may make a suggestion ? To keep the rhyming consistent, I would consider changing L 6 from "behind the disguise of " to behind (a) disguise. Perhaps that is just a typo since "of" is also repeated in L 7.
I'll say it again,,, more of your poems please ( think of that sing song voice from the Ovaltine commercial )
- *Jellz*Lv 61 decade ago
Maltese Breeder, you always make me smile with your poems. It is a pleasure to read them.
One look says it all
By Jellz Fisher
Perfect
tender
little
brilliant
Mona
different
individual
crazy
enigmatic
happy
crooked
silly
loving
knowing
open
In every smile, in every style,
Every little way you look, blows me away.
- FarmerLv 51 decade ago
this is the beginning of more smiles to come for sure.
and eyes are the other half of the smile.
nice going Ms B!
- Anonymous1 decade ago
wow!
thats one of the poems that i actually get.
good job
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- beauteimparfaitLv 51 decade ago
I like it, you should make it a song and have that be the opening verse.
- Anonymous1 decade ago
put down the jack daniels my friend
- Anonymous1 decade ago
Hahah, I loved it :) Keep it up.