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Smiles what do you think?

SMILES

Smiles on faces

In different places

Tenderness seen or

one that's mean

One that hides

behind the disguise of

of debauchery of guise

A smile of surprise

is seen in the eyes!

Update:

Thanks traveling yes definately a typo, thanks for noticing!

Update 2:

Thanks all, sorry there must be troll lurking around giving thumbs down, it wasn't from me, I appreciate all answers!

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  • 1 decade ago
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    MB,,, I do believe you are onto something here ( as opposed to being on something )

    If I may make a suggestion ? To keep the rhyming consistent, I would consider changing L 6 from "behind the disguise of " to behind (a) disguise. Perhaps that is just a typo since "of" is also repeated in L 7.

    I'll say it again,,, more of your poems please ( think of that sing song voice from the Ovaltine commercial )

  • 1 decade ago

    Maltese Breeder, you always make me smile with your poems. It is a pleasure to read them.

    One look says it all

    By Jellz Fisher

    Perfect

    tender

    little

    brilliant

    Mona

    different

    individual

    crazy

    enigmatic

    happy

    crooked

    silly

    loving

    knowing

    open

    In every smile, in every style,

    Every little way you look, blows me away.

  • Farmer
    Lv 5
    1 decade ago

    this is the beginning of more smiles to come for sure.

    and eyes are the other half of the smile.

    nice going Ms B!

  • Anonymous
    1 decade ago

    wow!

    thats one of the poems that i actually get.

    good job

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  • 1 decade ago

    I like it, you should make it a song and have that be the opening verse.

  • Anonymous
    1 decade ago

    put down the jack daniels my friend

  • Anonymous
    1 decade ago

    Hahah, I loved it :) Keep it up.

  • 1 decade ago

    I like it!

  • JIM O
    Lv 5
    1 decade ago

    i like it! we want more!

  • 1 decade ago

    it's very nice

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