Have you seen the tide?

As winter approaches

the frost clutches the air

leaving no entrance for warmth

save the hugs of loved ones

Visions of warming cocoa

thick blankets

and a white Christmas

let us embrace

that time of year

Together

You can't use the word 'crimson'! That is my lips' monopole adjective! :D

Ah ah, I love this poem. You are definetely going on a different path of writing. You are getting more unique, more exact and more sexy. I wonder if it is the effect of Shaun's school girl uniform :D

Come winter,

for summer has come and gone,

Gone awry

with flagrant fouls of intent.

Heat swollen rhetoric

breaks the gentle gent,

Unwanted.

Come winter,

ever and anon.

oh yeah....crimson is for Dora's luscious lips!

hmmm...this poem...an AWEsomely painted picture of winter's beckon!! I love it!!!

iTS BEAUTIFULLY WRITTEN!

I like ur words choice,it sets a good vibe and makes me feel happy inside.

lol that was corny,but true. ur a good poet as u probably all ready know,but one more time wont hurt.=]

keep up the great poetry,i'd like to read more of yours.

beautiful poem...very good use of imagery...and looky looky @ biscuits wit the bangin' follow up....ah...to be a poet and in love...beautiful things are spawned!

And white flakes form, every year.

The days of summer turn to autumns eve...once again to brave the winters bite. Thanks for sharing.

Awwww!!! The both of yall lol.