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Need desperate help coming up with a good topic sentence?

I am struggling to come up with a good topic sentence. Here is what the topic calls for: "What is the biggest change you have experienced in the last two years?" And actually I've had several. I've met my husband, married him, had a child with him (who's now a year old), and moved to Kansas. I went from being a single mother to married with a complete family in two years. Can someone PLEASE help me I'm desperate to come up with a GOOD topic sentence. Here's what I have so far: "The biggest change that I have experienced in the last two years is my relationship status." I really think there's something better though, any help would be greatly appreciated!!

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  • 1 decade ago
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    Actually the sentence in the explanation " I went from being a single mother to married....." is a much more interesting and attention grabbing topic sentence then the one you are using. I would use that as it would definitely make the reader want to learn more.

  • Anonymous
    1 decade ago

    Hmm... yeah you can get really creative with that. First of all, congrats on your marriage and your child! For your topic sentence, how about something like: "The past two years have brought 2 special people into my life - 2 people that have dramically changed it forever." -- or something like that. I don't know, good luck!

  • Anonymous
    1 decade ago

    you could say....

    2 more hearts beating along with mine

    relationships change... i proved it

    who could have thought that in 2 years everything could change

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