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PUNCTUATION. i agree with the dude above me, taking out "are"

and also, you need some commas and periods.

"I talk good words

to get by,

but evil thoughts rule

underneath those words.

It's like the mirror

of my thoughts, now broken

in pieces,

just doesn't

reflect what I say."

great job, though, i really like the idea expressed in it.

Way Back Home I'm lost in an empty street, Can't find a proper place to (fit) my feet; Not even a corner where i belong, Can't find (nor) a thought to make me strong. Oh! i wish find a way to lead me home.. I put hesitating foot forward, Can't help feeling like a coward; All the stares around, just keep pushin' me down, And i (can) do nothing, no courage to even return a frown. Oh! I wish find someone to lead me home! Waiting for the end of it all, Trying to find someone, break my fall; Trying to find a place where i fit in, Trying to smile while my world does spin. Oh! wish i could find a way back to my home! Home.... Where I feel I belong, Where I feel I can do nothing wrong, Where I feel everything goes right, Where I feel the sun shines bright. Oh! wish I could lead me back to my home! its very nice, it has also symbolic meanings in it for me here home is not only a home where we live but also the place where our thoughts live there can be much drawn from this write i would say it 9/9 love care and blessing Zahid from Pakistan

One small change

remove the word "are" in of

"my thoughts , now broken....."

It is hard to face the truth of man and how easily he says one thing and feels totally opposite.

well done, simple and to the point

I Likee It

=)

Very good

It's good, I like it.