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Catholic asked in Arts & HumanitiesPoetry · 1 decade ago

What do you think of this poem?

I Too Had Love To Give

I'd have been there for you

when you were grey and old

Now all that you will have

is pain and remorse untold.

Was it not in Earthly pleasure

that you and daddy made me?

Why then for Worldly treasure

the farewell that you bade me?

When you killed me, no tears,

just a sigh relief.

But one day, Dearest Mother

you will know the deepest grief.

Why was I not adopted?

could not someone else enjoy

watching me grow up to be

a delightful girl or boy?

Why did you slay me mother?

Why not let me live?

You would have Loved me Mother

I too had Love to Give.

-- Rick Christensen

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  • 1 decade ago
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    I think this is an excellent poem with great imagery

    The use of language is exceptional

    if you wrote this i think you should write another one and send it to me

    (could i please have best answer)

  • 1 decade ago

    the message conveyed is good. I liked it...

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