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Anonymous asked in Arts & HumanitiesPoetry · 1 decade ago

i wrote this poem for my daughters, what do you think?

YOUR DAD

Taking that book of the shelf,

Looking back on life itself.

Remembering when first learned to walk,

And my joy when you learned to talk.

I sit here with a smile thinking its not so bad,

You made me so proud to be your dad.

Showing me there was more to being a man,

Knowing you were looking at me "my biggest fan".

Fearing one day you may trip and fall,

Doing everything to protect you when you were small.

I sit here with a smile thinking its not that bad,

You made me so proud to be your dad.

You grew so fast right before my eyes,

Always loving you even through the lies.

Both of you as precious as some brilliant white pearls,

My days filled with wealth do to my little girls.

I sit her thinking it wasn't that bad,

I am so proud to be your dad.

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    I think 2 young ladies have a pretty neat dad.

    A few synonym mistakes but the point comes across clearly. A very nice write you have.

  • Anonymous
    1 decade ago

    WOW amazing i wish my dad loved me like that i love your poem

  • Anonymous
    1 decade ago

    it's beautiful i wish my dad wrote a poem for me.

  • 1 decade ago

    thats so cuteeee!

    i love it

    give it to themmmm!

    answer my question please

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  • Anonymous
    1 decade ago

    How old are they? :s

    Teenage years and they'll be like "OKAY, YOU'RE FRUITY."

    If they're older I think they'd like it. :D

  • 1 decade ago

    That's so sweet!

  • Anonymous
    1 decade ago

    i really like this.. its very good..

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