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A new working in my favourite genre - thoughts?
A White Light.
A shallow grave uncovered,
A mangled body of blood,
A bone twisted and torn,
A life washed away in the flood.
An eye mirrored in torture,
A grip tightened in foul play,
A mind innocent now strained,
A face shoved in the clay.
A vein severed by blade,
A place cursed and forgotten,
With thoughts it did rotten.
The story now has an end,
Stop digging he just might,
The soul has bounced forward,
Towards a shiny white light.
3 Answers
- DanialLv 51 decade agoFavorite Answer
Very dark theme! I still remember this was posted few months ago.
Its very descriptive of a real plot. Service as a universal message of the inhumanity of torturing human bodies, in any perspective under any claims: political, racial, religious, etc. Its universal because the site in question could be anywhere at any time. Such brutality may be seen even amongst a family members, motivated by vile reasons.
Very well penned! that is for sure, IMHO.
- BirdmanLv 71 decade ago
It is rather macabre and doesn't lighten the mood. For this reason it is not entertaining. Nor does it delight with it's dark message. I should focus on happier themes.
- Anonymous1 decade ago
Very good and well written, but what's with all the pain and misery,. Life's Not That Bad!!!!
