Entwined - does it need help?

Questions are intriguing! Step out of the mainstream and look in, from the outside, and all poetry is before you!

Outstanding!

Good Morning!

A questioning type of poem. Unfortunately, grammar mistakes lessen the impact. Here is a redo of your offering to give you a different perspective. Punctuation can do a lot to make a poem flow.

Perception, Entwined

How do we know

when more is less,

less is more?

How do we measure

quality of quantity?

Do we separate the two

choose one, or the other?

Do we balance it, juggle it

dismiss it, or accept it?

For one it is everything

another… nothing.

For one, backwards and meaningless,

another, all encompassing.

It is, if nothing else, perception.

Yes and the reality is in itself a pointless exercise in perception for there are no absolute truths but only the micro manifestations of the collective conciousness guided by our self made prophecy ultimately resulting in our returning to the infinite set of buzzing atoms that do not care but act in a purely random, non determinable matter.

nice words

Matters of perception always confound the question..somehow.

I'm going to have to agree with neon--punctuate. Nice content though, I like what it says/ask.

A bit like asking how big is the universe and being told "Depends..."

Viewpoint is everything.

Is "jungle" a typo?

That's really insightful. What help could ever be done?