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jonni f asked in Arts & HumanitiesPoetry · 1 decade ago

would anyone care to comment?

Moonlight in Winter

By Jonni F.

Dancing across the frozen grass,

glowing , waltzing, graceful

on the frost.

Like shimmering diamonds

to the eye.

Breath is icy as I speak,

my clouds reflect the silver hues.

Captivated, held in awe -

by a private luminous moment,

I stretch my arms to embrace

the dancing beams.

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  • 1 decade ago
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    I saw this as I was driving home last night. Even though I don't like it, twas beautiful. Your poem captures the beauty if winter.

  • arroya
    Lv 4
    5 years ago

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  • 1 decade ago

    This is nice, Jonni. I can see the moonlit branches, ethereal in the night, outlines in purest samite as you pirouette across the grass leaving small footsteps in the frosted grass stalks. Ice crystals making the very air glitter. Damn, it's cold!! ;-)

  • 1 decade ago

    Everyone has been virtually dancing in rain, ice, snow, starlight, sunbeams and Christmas lights this week. Isn't the Internet great?

  • Anonymous
    1 decade ago

    Funny how we think alike. I just answered Ma`s poem about snow. I said it was like looking up and seeing Diamonds falling. Very nice.

    "The Troll Hunter"

  • 1 decade ago

    The next time you have to much to drink, make sure you at least wear a coat when you go dancing outside! lol Kidding aside, I liked the images you penned.

  • 1 decade ago

    Nice images! Glad I live in Florida, I'm allergic to snow!

  • 1 decade ago

    Thank you very much for sharing. I can definitely picture your surroundings and the thrill that you get from being there.

    Very awesome!

  • Siren
    Lv 4
    1 decade ago

    nice. sounds like you really savour the beautiful moments. you have the ability to capture yourself in those moments. a desirable quality. i have my own dreamscapes. i'm there every day.

  • I catch the beams.. over the snow crested lilac bush.. and my head screams.. I don't want snow..

    Your poem soothes that screaming....

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