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English is not my mother language. Can you please help me?
This is my homework, I wrote some sentences. Please check my grammar and make some corrections if needed.
1.- I see how that trip propelled you to study more about other cultures. It happened something similar to me since I had classmates from other countries at my japanese class (many assian countries) and I made friends there
2.- I recently ended reading a French novel.
3.- So you're invloved in many activities, that sounds great!
4.- I finally spotted a school where I can keep on with my french and my italian
5 Answers
- KatLv 51 decade agoFavorite Answer
1. I see how that trip propelled you to study more about other cultures. Something similar happened to me. I had classmates from other countries in my Japanese class (many Asian countries) and I made friends there.
2. I recently finished reading a French novel.
4. I finally found a school where I can keep up with my French and Italian.
3 is good as it is. Well done!
- aidaLv 71 decade ago
I made a few minor corrections, but all in all, your sentences were good!
1.- I see how that trip propelled you to study more about other cultures. Something similar happened to me, since I had classmates from other countries (including many Asian countries in my Japanese class, and I made friends there
2.- I recently finished reading a French novel.
3.- So you're involved in many activities! That sounds great! [Make two sentences, or use more than a comma to connect the two parts.)
4.- I finally spotted a school where I can keep on with my French and my Italian. [Or say "continue" instead of "keep on with."]
Source(s): Retired English professor - 1 decade ago
1.- I see how that trip compelled you to study more about other cultures. Something similar happened to me as well. In my japanese class, I made new friends that came from other countries.
2.- I recently finished reading a French novel.
3.- So you're involved in many activities, that sounds great!
4.- I finally found a school where I can continue with my French and Italian studies.
Source(s): years of schooling, reading experience, etc. - 1 decade ago
You're doing great so far, here are some tips I have though.
1.I see how that trip propelled you to study more about other cultures. Something similar happened to me since I had classmates from other countries (asian ones) at my japanese class.
2. I recently finished reading a French novel.
(good job on 3)
4.I finally spotted a school where I can keep UP with my french and my italian
Oh and 1 more thing whenever you use a proper noun (like the name of something) it needs to be capitalized (like Italian)
Well you seem to be doing good. Good luck and if you have any questions please feel free to message me.
Source(s): I speak fluent English and am good at English classes - Anonymous1 decade ago
1- something similar happened to me.
3- involved.
4- knew about a school where I can keep up with my french and italian.
