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do you like this poem i just wrote?
its gonna go on the site with my book, The Hybrid-rough silk
but yeh. its about my crush... of whom. well yeh.
Confessions of love
The boy I love is brown haired, with big bouncy curls
The boy I love is just friendly to me, loves different girls
The boy I love is exactly like me, almost no difference at all
The boy I love is in always in my head, coming if I call.
The boy I love is afraid to speak his mind
The boy I love is somewhere, staring behind.
The boy I love is small, but with a huge heart
The boy I love is so cute; I loved him from the start
The boy I love has no need for me at all
The boy I love speaks, but the words just fall.
The man I love isn’t secretive inside, I can see right through
The man I love doesn’t understand, this emotion is very new.
The man I love, come out of your shell!
The man I love, don’t hide! I won’t yell!
The man I love is disappearing now
The man I love loves others; how could he? HOW?
Good bye, man of my dreams, farewell
I guess you’re now a story. Just a tale to tell.
hiya
yes i am 14 :P
ive had a crush on the guy for ages. and ive been thinking about making a poem about it (not a book though)
ive done a book etc...
http://www.scribd.com/doc/11306016/The-Hybrid-Roug...
so yeh. alot of people said i have the nack, so i decided to do a poem to see if i have "the nack" for that aswell haha
12 Answers
- 1 decade agoFavorite Answer
Well Megan, you do seem to have 'the nack' for both poetry and books.
And the way you change the words, 'the boy' into 'the man' is cool because of the way you've loved him since he was a boy till he was a man, it shows that you truly love him.
Lucky you, there's not much of those type of men out there that makes a girl love him from childhood to manhood.
(Unless were talking about celebraties were loads of girls love cute men!)
- Anonymous1 decade ago
Outstanding. You have taken a common angst and displayed it poetically so that the reader wants to complete the journey with you. This is how art is supposed to work. Very un-stupid, I think.
- 1 decade ago
Sometimes being repetative is a good thing, but other times, its not. In this case, its not. =/ sorry, but you could have done better.
I like the idea though. 5.5/10
- 1 decade ago
This is very good, especially for a beginner. You have a great deal of potential.
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- 1 decade ago
this made me think a whole lot more into things like that. this is great , you should write more love poems
Source(s): im 14 and i write poetry my self - 1 decade ago
forget what others say
Is great!
i love it!
and i love it more 'cause i'm going trough something like that.
I can relate.
LOVE IT!
- Anonymous1 decade ago
are you a child cuz that was stupid.i rap so i know how to make a poem
- 1 decade ago
i would give it 9 out of ten well done !!!
Source(s): i am 14 and would not write something like this at all!!
