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kissaled asked in Arts & HumanitiesPoetry · 1 decade ago

A new working, tell what you think?

Forgiving eyes.

Hard and black his hands are grasping,

A throat now bound and bruised no air,

Pushing inward with force no direction,

An outside look of empathy all fair.

Rubbing and tired against flesh now pink,

Blood rising to cool and heated skin,

Raw and imbalanced thighs for standing,

A frail body once plump now thin.

RRelease and pity flow as one,

the eyes lock in fear and near an end,

Away and falling deep and hard,

a look of sorrow from a fearful husband.

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  • 1 decade ago
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    You write on the verge of darkness, yet you seem not to be tempted to go any further into the darkness I see hidden well in your work

    My advice: no matter how dark it may be, it remains yours, so indulge your creative writing in dark thoughts

    I hope that I have helped you...

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