What do you hope to find here?

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Words
Fragments
Of the past
Present and future
Spoken or written
With conviction
Reflections of
A truth
Your truth
Searching
We seek
To find
A common thread
So that we too
Can lay claim
As we nod
Our heads
In approval 
Or utter disbelief
We do so enjoy 
The conversation
The exchange
Of words
Our words
A shared truth


Temari

King of Biscuits · Accepted Answer

*smile*

A spoken word can be many things. I love to hear each word you utter.

Alobar · Answer

That be words, well said.

I think the short lines may not have been the best choice, I find myself losing the rhythm, my eyes dancing around so. Just a minor sticking point.

Loved this:

Reflections of
A truth
Your truth

Anonymous · Answer

Truth and Truth?  Try another word.    (Our y...h maybe?)  
The short lines made me dizzy.  You have the rhythm, but it's hard to find as I'm searching for more.  How near is the floor and will it hurt when I fall having read this verse?

l_pro · Answer

Very nice :) This exactly describes what I and many others do on yahoo answers.

Anonymous · Answer

HERE...  I  hope  to  find  ...Some   type of  interesting views on how life is really  NOT what we think it is!!

giggling · Answer

Nice writing.  You have much talent.

Anonymous · Answer

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Persona · Answer

wow!

i hope to find love,

nothing else i want,

i want you with me,

but that i've already got!

Soft Heart · Answer

That's Lovely way to find HOPE :-)))

Anonymous · Answer

Exactly. 
Very well put.

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