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Socrates asked in Arts & HumanitiesPoetry · 1 decade ago

What's wrong with this Limerick, and why?

A poet once took up the challenge

To find a word rhyming with orange.

     He spoke choice after choice,

     Almost losing his voice,

'Til he sucked on a menthol throat lozenge.

Update:

Oh my! A pointless Limerick.

Who would have thought......

Update 2:

There is nothing 'chi-chi' about me, Jon,

unless you mean Chi-Chi the Giant Panda.

In which case, one could argue a slight

resemblance:

http://www.engadget.com/media/2006/06/p1020332.jpg

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  • Acorn
    Lv 7
    1 decade ago
    Favorite Answer

    I love it, Crates. Off-rhyme is very chi-chi in the elite of poesy, ya know.

    I remember seeing an ancient clip from a TV show with Petula Clark ("Downtown," "Don't Sleep in the Subway," lotsa hits back in the 50s and 60s).

    She posited: Cockneys are the only people in the world who have a rhyme for the word orange. It's the thing that allows a door to swing open and closed: a door 'inge.

    For some reason that makes me laugh.

  • 1 decade ago

    The last line has to many syllables. It should have the same as the first 2, which have 9. Last line has 10.

  • 1 decade ago

    "Lozenge" is not even considered a close rhyme to "orange", which has no pure rhyme. Ditto for "challenge".

    The only word, which is barely acknowledged, is "door-hinge" and that limits what you can do

  • Nothing rhymes with orange.

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  • -
    Lv 7
    1 decade ago

    Nothing's wrong with it, 'cause I never could say lozenge correctly!

    sounds good to me!

    ma

  • 1 decade ago

    even though challenge and lozenge(if thats a word) look like they sound like orange, they don't rhyme.

    http://answers.yahoo.com/question/index;_ylt=AhOmo...

  • Last line: 'Til he can be

    read like "Tilly.."

    ........ thus works for me.

  • Mixtli
    Lv 6
    1 decade ago

    I'm stumped.

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