What do you think of this for an animal rescues website homepage?

I'm working on redoing our rescue's homepage content. Right now its very cut and dry business facts about applying for non profit status and is very impersonal and has no personality. I'm wanting it to feel welcoming and casual like I'm talking to the person. In the second paragraph each of the things I'm directing them to will be a link to that section of the website. Just wanting a little input from someone else and what you would think of a group if you read this on their opening page. Thanks! Oh and "P" isn't the group name I just used that as a filler.

Welcome to "P"! We're glad you stopped by and hope you'll find everything you're looking for, including your new best friend! We're home to all kinds of animals from newborns to seniors, purebreds to lovable mutts, tiny 3 pounders to gentle giants topping the scales at 105! It can be an odd assortment but we love each and every one like they are our family.

We hope you'll stay around for a while and read about the rescue. You can check out our new arrivals in the adoptable cat and dog sections or read up about the sanctuary cats and outreach programs. Check out the inner thoughts of the rescue officials in the "P" blog or catch up on past "P" critters in the happy tails section! If you're feeling adventurous, venture over to the “ways to help” page and learn about volunteering with "P". There's always lots of fun to be had at adoption events!