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What do you think of this poem I wrote about my past?
I’m hurting on the inside
But these feelings I have to abide
I’ll get by, I always do
But still you don’t have a clue
How you damaged me deep within
I don’t know where you’ve been
You said goodbye long ago
Left me depressed and alone
Can’t go back to that day
In my head it still plays
Now you’re gone from my life
Took your child and your wife
Run away far from here
Get away from all the fear
Cuz you know what you did was wrong
But somehow you still went along
I take the blame for what you did
Even though I was young, just a kid
Now I’m older, I’ve come to appreciate
Because with this I have gained a trait
Strength is what I’ve gotten from this
Obtained a whole new type of bliss
I have people on my side
With them I confide
They taught me how to love and learn
From this mistake I didn’t burn
My soul is still strong and well
Even after all this hell
I got through this somehow
It’s you I feel sorry for now
Cuz you have to live with the guilt
It’s by you it was built
I have my life reversed
Have fun living with the cursed.
I'm not sure about the ending, and it needs a title. Thank you for all your comments and help, they are much appreciated.
I changed the last line to
Now you're left cursed.
1 Answer
- Anonymous1 decade agoFavorite Answer
great