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partial poem, what do you think?
okay, here is only part of my poem. one because i haven't finished it yet. i'd like to hear your thoughts about how it's going so far.
Whoosh, whoosh, whoosh.
These sticks of rainbow
Infuse color
into parchment
That was once still and bland.
***
Swirls of orange and yellow
form a transparent orb
Lain upon a ripple-less sea
of blue lead
***
Stroke by stroke
characters begin
to dance about the page.
Praising every
splash of color
emanating from the heavens above.
what do you think. comment please.
3 Answers
- 1 decade agoFavorite Answer
Wow! nice job. i really liked it. you can almost see all the colors and designs coming into place. you imagine a blank world and then see it filled with wonderful creatures and plants.great job.
- LifelineLv 71 decade ago
i like it. I can see the Artist as He created that which was to be for He crafted the heavens and seas.
He planned His creations to be.
In day seven He rested for the hues gave light, beauty, and me. :D
Keep up the great work. :)
Source(s): me, your friendly Pentecostal and a future psychologist
