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Marla ™ asked in Arts & HumanitiesPoetry · 1 decade ago

My lover wrote this for me, do you think it is romantic and nice enough to re-post for him?

When I say I Love You

does it say enough

can you feel, what you are in me

and see my eyes, as I tilt my head

silently peering to your soul

one grin from a smile

sly lips not quite there

but coming in closer to show

with no need to tell

in those words we find breath

only to be left breathless

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  • Anonymous
    1 decade ago
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    I think it definitely deserved a re-post.

    And can I saw this? Awwwwwwwwww

    O.k., I'm done now.

  • Anonymous
    1 decade ago

    That's a lovely poem!

  • 1 decade ago

    Sweet :)

  • 1 decade ago

    It's not the best but sure, why not.

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  • 1 decade ago

    ****! that is one VERY good poem!

    very smart

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