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Another, rate and opinions please?
From a while ago but still hope you like it.
Pen and Paper
Just to put it simply
I've got some paper and a pen
I'll rip sheet after sheet out
Until I find my Zen
I could write of all my troubles
I could write of all my strife
I could even tell the tale
Of how I almost took my life
How I walk alone
My friends they leave my side
It's just Me, Myself, and I
As I journey on this ride
I'd scribble you a romance
A failed attempt at love
It was never really serious
Somewhat like a falcon and a dove
You've read the cliche writings
'My boyfriend dumped me for a whore'
I'm sure you're sick and tired
Of being left in a bore
I'd tell magnifect adventures
Dramas that make you weep
One to pull at your heartstrings
Maybe one that you would keep
I'd want to make an impact
Make the reader really think
Tear at their emotions
Until they connect the link
I'd only hope you'd listen
To the words that I would write
Sometimes the things I think
Are just a little out of sight
Ah! Here it is
I think I finally found my Zen
Oooh, I'd write this down
If I could only find my pen.
D:
4 Answers
- 1 decade agoFavorite Answer
Oh my you're amazing, I read another of your poems. Honestly, I know nothing about poetry and can't give you any useful feedback but I'd rate it a 9 or 10 :D
- 1 decade ago
good effort... i liked it.
i hope u might have found your pen till now and will not lose it again .. :)
keep penning.....