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MoNoPoLy asked in Arts & HumanitiesPoetry · 1 decade ago

Another, rate and opinions please?

From a while ago but still hope you like it.

Pen and Paper

Just to put it simply

I've got some paper and a pen

I'll rip sheet after sheet out

Until I find my Zen

I could write of all my troubles

I could write of all my strife

I could even tell the tale

Of how I almost took my life

How I walk alone

My friends they leave my side

It's just Me, Myself, and I

As I journey on this ride

I'd scribble you a romance

A failed attempt at love

It was never really serious

Somewhat like a falcon and a dove

You've read the cliche writings

'My boyfriend dumped me for a whore'

I'm sure you're sick and tired

Of being left in a bore

I'd tell magnifect adventures

Dramas that make you weep

One to pull at your heartstrings

Maybe one that you would keep

I'd want to make an impact

Make the reader really think

Tear at their emotions

Until they connect the link

I'd only hope you'd listen

To the words that I would write

Sometimes the things I think

Are just a little out of sight

Ah! Here it is

I think I finally found my Zen

Oooh, I'd write this down

If I could only find my pen.

D:

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    Oh my you're amazing, I read another of your poems. Honestly, I know nothing about poetry and can't give you any useful feedback but I'd rate it a 9 or 10 :D

  • 1 decade ago

    good effort... i liked it.

    i hope u might have found your pen till now and will not lose it again .. :)

    keep penning.....

  • 1 decade ago

    Haha, that is so adorable ! i love it.

  • 1 decade ago

    i like it and love it :) keep going...

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