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Will you please read my poem? I'd appreciate it? :D?
From Rain to Rainbow
The sun comes up,
People rise for work,
Another day, the same old routine,
Life is just a boring normalcy now.
Your heart beats the same rhythm as everyone else,
Your eyes blink at the same moment as everyone else,
Your lungs breathe at the same time as everyone else,
Your brain thinks the same thoughts as everyone else.
We have all become robots,
Depending on the redundancy of our lives,
Needing it to survive,
Panicking when anything out of the ordinary occurs.
Shunning people that are different,
Pushing them to give in too,
Believing that our way is the only way,
Fearing anything that isn't the same.
Our lives are turning grey,
We see things in black and white,
And when we see a shimmer of color, of hope,
We close our eyes and wish it away.
If any of your own thoughts remain,
Listen to my voice, it will be your guide,
Follow it into a world of color, of choices,
Now is the time; you can regain your freedom.
-Kara-
10 Answers
- 1 decade agoFavorite Answer
Oh Kara how nice is is to hear from you again yes you know me Lilah Steve the Dark Prince Your poem is truly wonderful If only I could write as you do this truly is a masterpiece you should get it published ^=^
- ?Lv 45 years ago
Why we play with the aid of some (some) regulations: Rhymes and meters, figures of speech, bypass, connection, form and imagery, we use them to evaluate poems and poetry. Else, why submit them for critique? Poems are a private quest, however the the two author and reader would desire to seek for to connect - because of the fact in the event that they'd be known, poems would desire to positioned on a widely used outer garment- a difficulty noted as language.
- 1 decade ago
Well, I was born and raised as a poet of sorts, so let me the first to say...I think it's pretty good. I'd say with a little practice, you could have a good lump of gold here.
- Anonymous1 decade ago
PLEASE READ MY POEM! i posted in it a question. thanksss
here is what i think of yours:
i like all the analogies and color references but it seems a little bit more like a speech than a poem. i would try to make it more consistent
but i really like the content. it is really good.
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