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Bezza asked in Arts & HumanitiesPoetry · 1 decade ago

as it comes here it is?

my thoughts turn dark as

the end of daylight savings

closes the gap

robbed of my precious twilight

my sadness crouches above the joy

light and summer bring

S.A.D does not just live in text books

it sleeps upon my kitchen floor

resting

waiting

for winter:

crawling into bed with me

silently leaching my light.

so i reach out to the ether

through keyboard and mouse

for far away connections

to ease me through this

weary journey one more time

one more time

remembering the winter ends

knowing spring is my home

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    I have reverse S.A.D. If you don't mind.. just an idea;

    Thoughts turn dark

    saving daylight

    closes a gap

    robs precious twilight

    sadness above joy

    of light and

    summer.

    S.A.D(ly)

    sleeping on

    my kitchen

    floor

    resting

    waiting

    for winter:

    crawling into bed

    silently leaching my

    light.

    i reach through

    keyboard and mouse

    for connections

    to ease my

    journey one more

    time

    one more time

    remembering winter

    ends

    knowing spring

    is my

    home

  • aida
    Lv 7
    1 decade ago

    What's the question? Is this yours? I think it's quite good!

    You might like Robert Frost's "My November Guest."

    Source(s): Retired English professor
  • 1 decade ago

    I like the way IWMD arranged the poem.

    Nice poem.

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