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I wanted to start with this so-common, cliched phrase, then wander off on my own. OK?
breath of sea
come and take a walk with me
down to the raging boundless sea
down to the surf-torn tides and sand
beyond the cliffs to the edge of land
come to the sea horizon-bent
carved by the weight of sight and sound
to this pool of life we scarcely know
take my hand and come, let’s go
dawn breaks the gray-cast wilderness
time moves this restless space beyond
we – two simple creatures stand
to share the mysteries of our bond
deep in sleep the sea meets sky
where rain is torn with relentless cry
where heavens open unto the night
the source of life beckons the light
we are too of ages told
our first and last meet here as one
oh sea of whispers cry and moan
your pirouette awaits the sun
i clasp your hand in wonderment
the bursting bells and tinkling light
this vast unceasing churning form
is truest true and rightest right
i speak in silence hollow sound
i yearn to cry out – draw you near
I think your mist will be my strength
my love will last another year
2 Answers
- GrannyjillLv 71 decade agoFavorite Answer
Changed my mind. Here I am revisiting.....going out can wait.
As I said 'So different from your usual style' but, this has everything I like in poetry. It rhymes (but you are confident enough to abandon a strict rhyme where necessary) it has a wonderful rhythm and has something to say. Cliches are only cliches (for me) if there is no thought behind the familiar phrase....you use all that language provides and make the end product uniquely your own.
Love it.
(husband breathing down my neck, must dash)
- Anonymous1 decade ago
aaaaw! That's so heart warming and loving poem! It made me cry for happiness for you and how you felt along that day with forever memories! I love your poems!!! Keep up the great fantastic work!Such deep meaning in each poem! ;)