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Do you like to play games with words? How about letters?
cooking in the kitchen
my poetry lies folded in the wrappers
marked for value sifted sorted folded filed
rejected accepted a line of strenuous dispositions
stretching from the keyboard to the kitchen counter top
and there the toaster pops up nouns
the pot bubbles with a verbal sauce
to my left some crusty prepositions browning nicely
i have some lightly steaming adjectives
mixed in with some adverbs for flavor
but a rattle heard a u tips over and pours out his contents
all over his neighbor poor l he stands up like a v
next the i shoots his rocket pellet into outer space
and trenchant t tips over and stabs nubile n right in the head
and this letter goes and another comes
on this notion of mine
and the poetry comes and goes and flows across the room
from the kitchen to the eventual reward
placement into the new material file
and while the keyboard's still humming
and the waste paper basket 's filled with crumpled corn pops
some crazy-wire insects crawl over the top
scrambling to regain their original designs
before they were so contorted
and pressed upon my page
Cool Allie. Thanks
3 Answers
- 1 decade agoFavorite Answer
I love it! Very good and original; the image of fighting (playing?) letters is just too cool!
I love the last few lines, too; perfect ending!
Great poem!
- 1 decade ago
Nowadays I can imagine being in your poem and this one is so full of motion! This might happen to all the things before they are pressed on to a page! This is a very good, excellent poem! Very captivating! Keep up the good work! Hope this helps! ;)
- GrannyjillLv 71 decade ago
Very creative and original....I got lost in the middle with the actual letters (a u v i t n...could you make them spell something perhaps?)
That apart, I enjoyed this very much.