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usaforklift asked in Arts & HumanitiesPoetry · 1 decade ago

Do you like to play games with words? How about letters?

cooking in the kitchen

my poetry lies folded in the wrappers

marked for value sifted sorted folded filed

rejected accepted a line of strenuous dispositions

stretching from the keyboard to the kitchen counter top

and there the toaster pops up nouns

the pot bubbles with a verbal sauce

to my left some crusty prepositions browning nicely

i have some lightly steaming adjectives

mixed in with some adverbs for flavor

but a rattle heard a u tips over and pours out his contents

all over his neighbor poor l he stands up like a v

next the i shoots his rocket pellet into outer space

and trenchant t tips over and stabs nubile n right in the head

and this letter goes and another comes

on this notion of mine

and the poetry comes and goes and flows across the room

from the kitchen to the eventual reward

placement into the new material file

and while the keyboard's still humming

and the waste paper basket 's filled with crumpled corn pops

some crazy-wire insects crawl over the top

scrambling to regain their original designs

before they were so contorted

and pressed upon my page

Update:

Cool Allie. Thanks

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  • 1 decade ago
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    I love it! Very good and original; the image of fighting (playing?) letters is just too cool!

    I love the last few lines, too; perfect ending!

    Great poem!

  • 1 decade ago

    Nowadays I can imagine being in your poem and this one is so full of motion! This might happen to all the things before they are pressed on to a page! This is a very good, excellent poem! Very captivating! Keep up the good work! Hope this helps! ;)

  • 1 decade ago

    Very creative and original....I got lost in the middle with the actual letters (a u v i t n...could you make them spell something perhaps?)

    That apart, I enjoyed this very much.

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