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usaforklift asked in Arts & HumanitiesPoetry · 1 decade ago

A Kid's Story Poem. It's kind of long, but that's just what it is. I can make a short version. Do you like it?

There once was a young boy named Ned

who wouldn't say put in his bed.

His mother had kissed him at eight,

tucked him in and pulled the sheets straight.

And darkness filled all the room 'round,

so that Ned could hear nary a sound.

He should have been sleepy, he knew,

but outside the winter wind blew.

And how could the day end just so?

Poor Ned still had places to go!

And even if destined to sleep,

there were wishes and dreams he must keep

They played and built castles all day,

then at night had to put them away

They could never grow tired of tag,

nor could a puppy's tail wag its last wag!

It's hard saying goodnight to friends.

Little boys prefer beginnings to ends.

Ned still had some growing to do,

and each day he started anew.

And these were the usual things,

that made up his summers and springs!

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Tonight was a cold night in winter.

They had stacked wood and made the logs splinter.

And while the pillow tousled his hair,

outside a storm blustered the air.

Big tree branches scratched the night air.

Ned was glad that his parents were there!

Ned knew that the fire still burned

in the big room. Alone his heart yearned.

He knew that the embers still glow.

If he waited, then no one would know!

As he lay, his awareness was heightened.

To his eyes, the room gradually lightened.

So Ned said his prayers and he waited

His plan was still there, just belated!

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Ned listened for sounds in the house,

but his parents were quiet as a mouse.

They tip-toed about without sound,

but Ned knew they were up and around.

At long last the steps made a CREEK!

Ned could tell there were two sets of feet.

He lay stone-still, his heart pounding,

his thoughts and his visions abounding!

Ascending, the sounds turned to the right.

Ned could hear his parent's door shut tight.

The light from the crack in the door

was flicked off and then was no more.

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So now was the time for decision.

Ned's plan would require precision!

His plan was to make it downstairs,

but before him lay pitfalls and snares.

And the first was the sound of his feet,

he knew, as he slipped from the sheet.

Little boys know how to make the door CLICK

but just when the big clock went TICK

He knew how to hold to the rails

and step where the boards had no nails

And bundled from head to tip-toe

Ned set out for the big room below

Ned stood at the foot of the stair

The fire tinged the chill in the air

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A flame flickered and the embers glowed bright

Ned stepped forward his feet feeling light

Then he lay down and drew up his feet

it felt good to lie close by the heat

Darkness deepened and cast its long palls

and shapes great and small danced the walls

Ned's eyelids grew heavy and then fell

but there's more to our story to tell!

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Day came now to visit the boy

but now the Real Things were a toy

His school was a great stone-built castle

The guards wore a steel helmet and tassel

The spires of the castle rose high

past the clouds and far into the sky

Ned's teachers were all dressed up as knights

on big stallions, could give you a fright!

And somehow the boy was the King

which was not the only strange thing

His mommy and daddy weren't 'round

and he as the one that they'd crowned

A fair princess was imprisoned up where

a great dragon had captured here there

In this land where time had stood still

Young Ned found a test for his will

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Well, there wasn't so much he could do

So he set out to see the thing through

Ned started to climb the tall spire

step by step, and it seemed to grow higher

He could hear then that someone was calling

and he climbed on with no thought of falling

When he finally came to the top

two big bolts on a door made him stop

And poor Ned spoke as brave as he could

“Never fear! This door is just wood!”

And then from the shadows, a great roar!

The great dragon rose from the floor

A terrible green monster in scales

His huge claws were sharper than nails

He blew clouds of black smoke all around

belched hot fire and shook the whole ground

Then he spoke, and he said, "I'm to dine!

And you'd make a fine morsel, with wine!"

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The mean old dragon took aim

and shot directly at Ned with his flame

But Ned saw it and jumped to the side

There was still no place he could hide

And the flame burnt the locks off the door

Ned leaped in and lit on the floor

"We have only one hope," the princess said

Quick! Or we'll both wind up dead!

"Cut a lock from my hair, and count three,

and we'll sail from this place, be set free!"

So Ned scattered her hair like a sail,

and they landed safely, though shaken and pale

The dragon had set the place burning

It was

Update:

dragon had set the place burning

It was clear there would be no returning

The two had no moment to spare

with the smoke and the flames in the air

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When the fire had finally died down

Ned discovered he'd misplaced his crown!

It must have been lost in their flight

as they fell through the air in the night

And the princess had lost something too!

It seems she had lost her right shoe

And a king with no crown must go home

while a princess with no shoe cannot roam

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As Ned stared into the fire's ember

he started to faintly remember

Here was carpet, not grasses that grow

and no castle, just the wall and his shadow

And whether kings and princesses come out

in unsure. Now the fire was out!

And quite suddenly, the big room was chilling

and with change of heart, Ned was now willing

to crawl off to sleep in his bed

and nothing more need be said!

Update 2:

Poemhunter.com is fun. Thanks GJ for the referral to it. http://www.poemhunter.com/tom-courtney/poems/

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  • 1 decade ago
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    Great poem I must say.

    Children will love it!!

    Source(s): Why not submit it to http://www.kidsstoriesonline.com/ so kids can see your poem and tell you what they think.
  • 5 years ago

    The poem and the short story have some things in common: A storyline, form, theme, language, and the authorial voice (as point of view or as persona). But the form with the most brevity is poetry. It allows compact and precise composition as well as license to break rules of grammar and tradition. Short stories typically have the tried and true beginning, middle and end, and they opperate on a schemata from problem to climax to resolution. Gertude Stein wrote a piece in defense of the short story and the public's appreciation of any prose, called "Composition as Explanation." Robert Frost wrote a piece called "Education by Poetry" which insists that everyone needs to understand metaphor in order to understand persuasion, literature and politics. Edgar Allen Poe wrote "The Principle of Composition" a treatise on how he composed The Raven, and it makes a case for modern detective and suspense. I am a poet and a short sorty writer, but I htink i prefer the poem to the story, though I love both forms. The message determines the medium. Some people write poetry as if it is a matter of dashing loose phrases that rhyme together. It is not. Some people write stories that include details that do nothing to enhance the story. Which is better? Neither. So, one must know the limits and the power of the form to truly choose when one or the other is appropriate and most useful.

  • 1 decade ago

    i like it!

    it's cute!

    it would make a good children's book with illustrations and things.

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