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Hey what do you think about this poem 10 pts best answer?its short?
i thought a tree could spread its wings
and maybe help me fly
i thought the rain could drown my pain
and help me say goodbye
i thought the thunder was a sound of hope
cause maybe id get by
then i heard the sound of thunder breaking my tree
the sound of rain breaking my pain
my hope my rain
no flying away for me
no thunder that could set me free
no more pensive memory's
no more hope for me
no more thoughts for me
im done and i don't believe.
is this poem good enough to read in class????????
ohh i ment to say
no more flying away from me
no more thunder that can set me free
6 Answers
- 1 decade agoFavorite Answer
it's an excellent poem but the words get a little jumbled and it seems a bit confusing. it's a great poem though really. if you get the words straightened out it would be super awesome. work on it then i'll be happy to look at it again and tell you what i think. however not that much needs changing. Good Luck and i'll be watching. lol
- 1 decade ago
I like it. I think it's very heartfelt, and definitely good enough to read in class. Change "memory's" to "memories" and you're good to go. And fix your capitalization and punctuation.
- 1 decade ago
i give it 9/10 its good. it has feeling of pain and hope two things that make great poems.
- 1 decade ago
that's the best poem I've ever read!!!!!it's totally a good poem 2 read in class!
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