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usaforklift asked in Arts & HumanitiesPoetry · 1 decade ago

I'd like to share this with you. Do you enjoy ~ fantasy, kind of a kid's thing?

The Weasel was wheezing one day

perhaps it seems odd to say

The sun went into a hole in my hand

and the moon came out to play

A very big Nerf strode up just then

just as the Air came out

I was holding Wendell upside down

to see if the Bug would come out

I thought it would help to warm him

He sipped at the Hot Choc-a-rumpus

He must have recovered completely

as he left with nary a thump-us

Oh whistle me, whittle me every way

down to the Lazy Old Sea

I'll have to go fishing or swishing or wishing

and see what I have to see

Patty fat, porky fork, ribble de do

when my work is almost through

I have to attend to my own affairs

and only the daytime will do

So Wendell, he's my soft, fat friend

His nose is pink and moist

His whiskers twitch at every move

He's pound for pound Top-choice

The day the Great Rock fell

it shook us all around

I fell out of the tree and plunk

I met a very new friend on the ground

Pardon me, I'm Terwiler, a Fosfit

in case you didn't know

I'm probably quite a bit too fat

on top, as well as below

You see, the Light split open the Air

and Rock Wumps must take their chances

So then I'm off, I almost forgot

to the river, by happenstances

I probably couldn't explain to you

why we find our affairs this way

It must seem odd to you, as you're

from the Land of Night and Day

And I know you can't speak Woofie

but we speak it with native tongue

If I say grab-o-lilly-o-lip

the words can be spoken or sung

So welcome! Come along with us

I've got no place to go

You're free to visit us any old time

but your Real Things call, we know

And we know you are the Humans

We have you all on our List

and you know us: we're your Daydreams

We're here, then we're gone like the mist

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  • Anonymous
    1 decade ago
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    Wow! I like fantasy but it doesn't mean I love all fantasy poems! I love this one of yours though! Quite rare I say! In this poem I felt I was in it and I felt I had a little adventure! I'll be glad welcomed I say! You did a good job and have a great day! Hope this helps anyway! ;)

    P.S.- Sorry if I sound to rhymie I guess I'm happy today and this poem made me happier! Thanks!

  • Anonymous
    1 decade ago

    My cottontail

    swallowed a hole, and

    the negatives that were produced

    began to crack

    my teeth, and

    as they fell,

    they grew feet,

    and eyes ...

    some danced, some sung,

    some pranced, some lunged, but

    none dare wander;

    the milky plains

    in the distance - luminescent, portend glow.

    Source(s): I have found the Golden Ticket! Let me in!
  • 1 decade ago

    I wasn't too sure about this when I began it, but it grew on me...very Lewis Carroll, 'Alice in Wonderland' and 'You are old, Father William' type of thing.

    I think the thing that swinged me

    (yes, I know it should be swung!)

    Is the image of the fat little creatures

    ...they'd make a lovely kid's cartoon.

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