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Please Read!! DREAM POEM!! THANKS A TON!! :D?

This is another poem that i have written (just a couple of minutes ago! :D ) and i was wondering what everyone thought of it! please be honest!

A Dream

A dream is like a window,

a passage for your heart.

Deciding where you should go,

before your eyes know where to start.

A dream is like a wish,

that you dont know you make

an unknowing path that,

your heart thinks you should take

A dream has all the things,

that you ever want to see

and also all the places,

that you ever want to be

So listen very closely,

and you will surely find

that everything you have ever asked

is lying just inside!

Update:

Okay i just came up with this part to add:

A dream is like a falling star,

that you wish upon at night.

A small thing that you beleive in,

even though its out of sight.

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    love it love it love it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    Source(s): great poem gurl
  • 1 decade ago

    i love it :D great play of words :D

    care to comment on mine?: http://answers.yahoo.com/question/index;_ylt=AvkOe...

  • Anonymous
    1 decade ago

    excellent

  • 1 decade ago

    well that was just dreamy

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  • Anonymous
    1 decade ago

    it is ......... very good.

    dreams are good

    Source(s): my mind
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