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Can someone please help me improve on this? It's called Sapna, meaning Dream in Hindi

Creak, the tiresome timber bar,

Moans as my feet scrape across,

I haul myself from distance afar,

It's throws, long and sorrowful,

I tremor in the gaze of shame,

A nail protrudes and rips,

As I am tricked by the atlas of solitude,

Jagging into supple flesh,

Showing nothing of the magnitude,

Yet, a mere echo of my heart,

Determination my sole companion,

For a voyage of the heart,

This meandering, a spillage of the spirit,

The rope of connection, tattered apart,

I long for the sheath of your protection

Refuge from the blistering wind amiss,

Dominated by the desire, respite from your absence,

Natures whip lashes, exposure is furious,

For unspeakable actions, a lover's blasphemy,

Our souls entwined once more