Will you comment on this one....?

Beautiful & bittersweet.

It paints a picture of both sweet memory & longing.

What is unsaid but implied, I wish you were not leaving, is what touches me the most.

Thank you for sharing!

Blessings!

My cat's call is Joan. as quickly as I moved into my domicile the carport storage door became open. I closed it. numerous days later i observed a scent. I opened the door and there have been 5 ineffective kittens interior. as quickly as I rotated there became a black cat at my ft. I promised that if she had yet another muddle i could preserve them. She had yet another muddle. All yet one walked off into the wooded area (next to my domicile), all excep one that stayed. She continues to be with me at present. She is now +/- 22 years previous in human words. basically a passing concept

If your love doesn't swoon after reading this

he's dead!

I found this to be beautiful expression of the moment.

Well done.

ma

Beautiful! I love the description and diction and word choice, as well as the vivid adjectives.

Thanks for sharing this awesome poem, and keep writing!