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I'm new and I need some pointers please help, but don't be mean, thats just rude :)

I looked up at the clock. It had just turned 6:45.

"I am now officially thirteen!" I smiled.

Jack laid down beside me. He intertwined his fingers in mine and we sat there just staring at each other.

"So do you want to go back to the party?" I asked getting a little uncomfortable.

"No, I was thinking of something different."

He rolled over on top of me and we started kissing. I loved Jack. Everything about him, his short black hair that he spiked up everyday, his deep ocean blue eyes, and the faded freckles that covered his nose. I really did love him. What other way is there to show it.

"Are you okay with this?" He stopped kissing me and looked sternly in my eyes.

"Positive."

He lifed his shirt over his head and I did the same. He began kissing me again.

"I love you, Scar," He said between kisses.

"I love you, too, Jack."

I grabbed at the button on his jeans and.....

"Mommy?" Carter said, snapping me out of my memories.

"Yeah, sweety?"

"What were you thinkin 'bout?"

"Nothing, baby, are you finished with you cereal?"

She grabbed a spoon full and shoved it in her mouth, "Mmmhmmm."

I laughed and grabbed her bowl. She was so much like me when I was a kid.

"What did Mommy teach you?"

"I'm sawy, Yes, ma'am!" She said looking at me with her big blue eyes. She had so much of Jack in her it was uncanny.

"Mom? Were going to school!" I yelled. I knew she wasn't going to answer, she was probably knocked out cold from last night. Ever since she got the divorce papers in the mail from dad she has been drinking more and more everyday.

I couldn't believe Carter was already five and on her way to kindergarten. She has grown up so fast.

I found out I was preganant a few weeks after my thirteenth birthday. My dad went crazy and skipped out on me and my mom. She decided we should move somewhere I could go to a teen pregnancy school. In oregon they had one for younger girls.

Once Carter was born I decided to just stay in Oregon and go to school there. We've lived here ever since.

"Okay, Carter, now I don't want you to be scared, just be yourself and you'll make tons of friends. Also, be on your best behavoir, and don't forget the manners I taught you," I said unbuckling her car seat. My vision got blurry, I didn't think I was going to cry but I couldn't help myself.

She hopped out of the car and started walking toward the school. She turned around and ran toward me. I caught her and we sat there in a hug for what seemed like hours.

"I love you, Mommy."

"I love you, too, baby."

I was running late like always, but Mr. Pearson has been getting more and more strict on tardy's, especially for a senoir.

I ran through the front doors and heard a bell.

"Don't worry, it's the first bell." He said. I sighed with relief looking up at Ricky. He gave me a peck on the cheek, as in a hello and grabbed my hand.

"Thank goodness, it took longer than planned dropping off Carter," I explained.

"Well It's your kids first school day, it's natural,"

Langston, my best friend walked up before I could say anything else.

"Have you seen him?"

"Lang, I just got here, how could I? Wait, who?" I asked confuzed.

"The new guy, he is Gor-geous!" she squealed.

I rolled my eyes. Ever since her boyfriend Austin cheated on her, she has been on the prowl for a new guy.

"Hey not everyone gets lucky and finds a guy that's actually faithful, she huffed. I just shook my head and walked away.

"I'll see you guys later," I yelled over my shoulder.

The new guy had alot of my classes but so many people swarmed around him, I couldn't get a good look.

I tried to talk to him in study hall, but when I was on my way, Kalee Morasco sat next to him. And let's just say that Kalee always gets what she wants and it's him right now.

That was the last time I tried to get to know him.

The final bell rang and I took off to my car. Being me though I tripped over my own feet and went spiraling to the ground.

I started picking up my books when two hands grabbed them first.

"Here. Are you okay? I saw you go down, wow," I looked up to see who was talking. A boy, with black hair that layered to his shoulders, blue eyes, and way tall. It had to be the new guy, because I had never seen anyone like him. Langston wasn't lying when she said he was gorgeous, either.

"Uh, thanks. Can I have my stuff back now?" I asked, sticking out my hand. I didn't want Ricky to think something was going on.

"Oh right, here. I'm Jake, by the way."

"Yah I know, your some kind of celebrity here."

"So that's why that girl asked for my autograph," he said with a wry smile.

I laughed so hard I almost dropped my books again.

"Whoa there," he said steadying my stuff.

"Thanks, again. I'm Scarlett."

"Your Scarlett?"

"So you've heard of me?" I said smiling, "Let me guess, Bo