WHAT DO YOU THINK OF MY LYRICS?

Hey guys. I wrote a new song about my best guy friend's ex cheating on him. I want some opinions and feedback and please be HONEST.

It's called THE BLUE HOUR

verse 1:

Now that your connection is at death,

you only have a little time to hold your breath,

and say that I was right.

But I'll let you cry tonight.

You gave her your heart.

And she tore it apart.

But I'll be the one you can talk to,

who will listen.

No matter what you do,

I won't keep you from running.

As your world is turning black,

well I'll be around.

Just don't make a sound.

Chorus:

I know you thought you'd be together forever.

And at least you never surrendered.

And your once so strong connection is now at death.

I'll let you just hold your breath, tonight.

As we come to the blue hour of your darkest day,

just realize I'll be here for you everyday.

Verse 2:

She told you she'd be there till the end.

But if you'd turned around

you'd know that I was your friend.

But when you would kiss goodnight

you never knew that I was right.

Your heart will not bleed for eternity.

I'll save your heart from insanity.

And tonight, I will let you cry.

Chorus.

Verse 3:

I hate to say that I was right.

I'm sure you'll run outta tears tonight.

I guess you can't always forgive and forget.

At least now you're surrounded by serenity.

Your heart will not bleed for eternity.

Just know I'm always around.

I won't make a sound.

I won't let you fall to the ground.

Just be with me now.

Chorus.

That's it!!!!!! If you can relate to the song, share your story with me please!! Thanks for reading.