♫Fallyn♫

My guy friend that I've known since seventh grade (we're fifteen now) found out by our other friend "Sherryl" that I liked him because she was going to tell hin to ask me to homecoming two months ago. But before that, at the beginning of the school year he was always sitting by me at lunch and we found out we had a lot of things in common including how we both love music, art, and play guitar. Sherryl told him that he should ask me to homecoming and he kept saying why and she finally had to tell him that I liked him, but he said he didn't like me more than a friend. It's been a little awkward since, but he's given me lots of hugs and compliments the band shirts I wear. He also comments on my profile pics on facebook saying my smile looks good on me and how awesome the pics are. He doesn't talk to me as much though. Sherryl also likes him and me and my other friend think that he likes her too...he kinda asked her out on a movie date tonight. Any advice, tips, or similar experiences???

So I've liked my guy friend since 7th grade, and I've fallen really hard for him. Homecoming's coming up and he found out that I liked him and rejected me. He and I didn't talk for a week. Then he called me on Saturday, saying he felt bad and that he was sorry. I said I was sorry too but that felt wrong to say. He said we were friends again but on Monday he didn't talk me. I called him yesterday to see what was up, and he said nothibg and that he would talk to me the next day. That was today and all he said to me was hi.

The only songs that I have are:

What I Meant To Say by Daughtry

Savin Me by Nickelback

Why Do You Want Him? by Green Day

I'll listen to rock, metal, blues or pop. Please no country, rap, hip hop...

Thanks :)

My guy friend rejected me to homecoming. He didn't talk to me for a week. Then he called me last night saying he felt bad, and that he was sorry. I said I was sorry as well. But I still feel like I said the wrong thing, and it's like there's some knife stuck in my chest. The only song I have is What I Meant To Say by Daughtry.

Thanks :)

It's called "Can't Die Tonight". It's a rock song.

Verse 1:

As I pick the petals from a forget me not,

I realize we consumed all the time we had.

A moonbeam in a dark night sky.

There was some good, there was some bad.

We'll never wanna remember

how it fell apart,

how it came to discard.

Chorus:

It scurried like a life ending fast.

Gotta move on, stop living in the past.

The sorrow came around seasonal.

Are we gonna remember this tomorrow?

Can the moon give a little more light?

This just can't die tonight.

Verse 2:

As I sit here and give a lot of thought,

I wish I was so forgetful.

Is there a reason I'm not remorseful?

It was so strained.

But I'm feeling off guard and careless.

We could reform but what would we obtain?

Chorus.

Verse 3:

When it was captive,

it was never loose, always tight.

When we had let them know,

it vanished out of sight.

Can the moon give a little more light?

This just Can't die tonight.

Chorus.

Verse 4:

The forget me not,

I'll keep it with me forever.

Even when I don't wanna remember.

Will you keep me in sight?

This just can't die tonight.

No....this just can't die tonight.

So what do you think? Feedback and criticism would help :)

Do they have a sub genre name for modern hard rock bands like

papa roach

daughtry

nickelback

theory of a deadman

rise against

godsmack, etc.

please dont say alternative because i automatically think of shitty bubblegum pop bands they consider alternative like paramore

3oh!3

all time low

owl city

It's called Black Chromatic. Honest Feedback please :)

Verse 1:

I have an addiction to something I'll never get.

I have a confusion of why I really had left.

A little depression can go a long way.

And deprivation is what I feel everyday.

It's been raining for a while outside.

By now you'd think I'd see a rainbow.

Aren't they supposed to be colorful?

Not something that's supposed to hide.

Why do I see the sky black?

Everybody else see's it in color.

I feel like I'm in some old photograph.

But I'm crazy and I wonder...

Chorus:

Am I going color blind?

Am I just losing my mind?

Peace is supposed to be serene.

Colors should just intervene.

The clouds are black.

Too much darkness when I'm supposed to be optimistic.

Is there such a thing as black chromatic?

Verse 2:

I have a problem: I'm going idiotic.

My decision is to stop trying to be perfect.

The temptation is serious.

Then again, I'm delirious.

A rainbow is so delicate.

And black clouds take over.

And it's juat hypnotizing me.

Deprivation ain't givin me closure.

Why do I see the sky black?

Everyone else see's it in color.

I feel like I'm in some old photograph.

Colors come on over.

Chorus.

Verse 3:

I'll light a fuse.

I'll tell the news.

In color.

I'll use what I got.

If I like it or not.

In color.

An old photograph

covered in black.

Not color.

Murky an gloomy.

Not color.

I'm in a fluster.

Chorus (2x)

I see a glimmer of me in an incentive.

For getting black chromatic.

So what do you think?

Call Your Name by Daughtry

November Rain by Guns N' Roses

Nothing Else Matters by Metallica

I live in Denver and I wanted to go to the Nickelback/Papa Roach concert at Fiddler's Green Ampitheatre. I keep going onto ticketmaster.com and livenation.com and everytime I try it says there are no matches available. Does anybody know if its sold out or if the websites down? Please just tell me if you know anything.

I wrote a song called "Catch Me If You Can" but it didn't fit right so I wrote another one with the same title and I like this one better. I want honest feedback. Thanks.

Verse 1:

When you're running in a field to the rainbows

what you're really running in is the shadows.

You're running away to fast.

You gotta first heal the past.

You could live your life all on your own.

But it's not easy being all alone.

If you turn around

you'll see what's suffocating you is

no one has made amends or apologized.

Holding it in will not help you realize

Chorus:

No one said life is gonna be fair.

You have to face what's real

Your fairytale is a little to twisted.

Running away from your past is like telling it

Catch Me if you can.

Don't bury your head in the sand.

Please don't catch me if you can.

Verse 2:

When you have dreams ready to unfold,

but you don't wanna listen to what you've been told,

Well that rainbow is at the end of the road

and there is not pot of gold.

As your tears turn into fire that the ice can't melt,

is this a feeling you've ever felt?

You're running away too fast.

You gotta first heal the past.

Chorus.

Verse 3:

Can you fix the damage that's been done?

Even though you know you weren't the one?

Could you see how far you can come?

When fire melts the ice

can you realize

you need them to make amends.

Running away from a broken heart.

Running away from a broken home.

Running away from the lighting

that striked your only hope.

Chorus (2x)

Running away from a broken heart.

Running away from a broken home.

Running away from the lighting

that striked your only hope....

Catch Me if you can.

That's it! It's a rock song. And this really came from my heart.

I wrote a song called "Catch Me If You Can" but it didn't fit right so I wrote another one with the same title and I like this one better. I want honest feedback. Thanks.

Verse 1:

When you're running in a field to the rainbows

what you're really running in is the shadows.

You're running away to fast.

You gotta first heal the past.

You could live your life all on your own.

But it's not easy being all alone.

If you turn around

you'll see what's suffocating you is

no one has made amends or apologized.

Holding it in will not help you realize

Chorus:

No one said life is gonna be fair.

You have to face what's real

Your fairytale is a little to twisted.

Running away from your past is like telling it

Catch Me if you can.

Don't bury your head in the sand.

Please don't catch me if you can.

Verse 2:

When you have dreams ready to unfold,

but you don't wanna listen to what you've been told,

Well that rainbow is at the end of the road

and there is not pot of gold.

As your tears turn into fire that the ice can't melt,

is this a feeling you've ever felt?

You're running away too fast.

You gotta first heal the past.

Chorus.

Verse 3:

Can you fix the damage that's been done?

Even though you know you weren't the one?

Could you see how far you can come?

When fire melts the ice

can you realize

you need them to make amends.

Running away from a broken heart.

Running away from a broken home.

Running away from the lighting

that striked your only hope.

Chorus (2x)

Running away from a broken heart.

Running away from a broken home.

Running away from the lighting

that striked your only hope....

Catch Me if you can.

That's it! It's a rock song. And this really came from my heart.

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I'm a singer/songwriter/guitarist and I wanna be in the music industry so bad. It's a long time dream. The website says when you submit your lyrics, you might be discovered big time. Do you think this might be true or do you think they're scamming people?

It's called CATCH ME IF YOU CAN. I really want some feedback. It's a rock song.

Verse 1:

Ir's holding me spellbound.

Enthralled by the sound.

In my own fantasies and dreams.

Try to get away from a living hell.

I know the music is what feelings sound like.

And my feelings are dark melodies.

Somebody told me,

what I write is Black Chromatic.

My darkest feelings are optimistic.

And if I never make it,

my life would be a nervous breakdown.

Chorus:

So will you catch me if you can?

And let my music take a stand?

Will you understand, who I am?

And why my songs are what I sing?

And why it means so much to me?

So catch me if you can.

Verse 2:

When words fail, music speaks.

Either way I'm only me.

I could strum my guitar.

I could play that busted and burned piano.

But I won't swallow my words.

I'll sing them out.

And I won't let you put words up in my mouth.

I won't runaway from my dreams.

I'll let out all my screams.

And if I never make it,

my life would be a nervous breakdown.

Chorus.

Verse 3:

Everytime I'm about to concise,

I realize,

I can't be who you want me to be.

If I don't benefit your needs,

then don't take me.

Chorus.

It's called CATCH ME IF YOU CAN. I really want some feedback. It's a rock song.

Verse 1:

Ir's holding me spellbound.

Enthralled by the sound.

In my own fantasies and dreams.

Try to get away from a living hell.

I know the music is what feelings sound like.

And my feelings are dark melodies.

Somebody told me,

what I write is Black Chromatic.

My darkest feelings are optimistic.

And if I never make it,

my life would be a nervous breakdown.

Chorus:

So will you catch me if you can?

And let my music take a stand?

Will you understand, who I am?

And why my songs are what I sing?

And why it means so much to me?

So catch me if you can.

Verse 2:

When words fail, music speaks.

Either way I'm only me.

I could strum my guitar.

I could play that busted and burned piano.

But I won't swallow my words.

I'll sing them out.

And I won't let you put words up in my mouth.

I won't runaway from my dreams.

I'll let out all my screams.

And if I never make it,

my life would be a nervous breakdown.

Chorus.

Verse 3:

Everytime I'm about to concise,

I realize,

I can't be who you want me to be.

If I don't benefit your needs,

then don't take me.

Chorus.

That's it! If you wanna see some of my other songs here are the links:

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It's a song by the late singer Selena. It's called Captive Heart. Is about love at first sight? I'm not sure.

I see him walkin'

I sense the danger

I hear his voice

And my heart stops

He wears a face of the night

Ooh - the perfect stranger

And I'm fallin'

Ready or not

Don't think about it

Who knows where the wind blows

No doubt about it

I'll go where he goes

(Chorus)

My captive heart (he holds the key to these emotions)

My willing soul (let me drown in this ocean)

And I carry the flame

Like I did from the start

As long as he's callin', callin'

My captive heart

Fire burns

So I've been told

But I like the way it feels

He has a wild passion

That drives away the cold

And I know his touch is real

Don't think about it

I'll go where he goes

(Chorus)

Don't think about it

Who knows where the wind blows

No doubt about it

I'll go where he goes

It's called THE BLUE HOUR. It's about my best guy friend's ex cheating on him.

Verse 1:

Now that your connection is at death,

you only have a little time to hold your breath,

and say that I was right.

But I'll let you just cry tonight.

You gave her your heart

And she tore it apart.

But I'll be the one who you can talk to,

who will listen.

No matter what you do,

I won't keep you from running.

As your world turns to black,

well I'll be around.

Just don't make a sound.

Chorus:

I know you thought you'd be together forever.

At least you never surrendered.

Your once so strong connection is now at death.

I'll let you just hold your breath, tonight.

As we come to the blue hour of your darkest day,

just realize I'll be here for you everyday.

Verse 2:

She told you she'd be there till the end.

If you had turned around

you'd know that I was your friend.

When you would kiss goodnight,

you never knew that I was right.

Your heart will not bleed for eternity.

I'll save your heart from insanity.

And tonight, I will let you cry.

Chorus

Verse 3:

I hate to say that I was right.

I'm sure you'll run outta tears tonight.

I guess you can't always forgive and forget.

At least now you're surrounded by serenity.

Your heart will not bleed for eternity.

Just know I'm always around.

I won't make a sound.

I won't letyou fall to the ground.

Just be here alone with me now.

Chorus.

That's it! Hope you liked it!

It's called THE BLUE HOUR. It's about my best guy friend's ex cheating on him.

Verse 1:

Now that your connection is at death,

you only have a little time to hold your breath,

and say that I was right.

But I'll let you just cry tonight.

You gave her your heart

And she tore it apart.

But I'll be the one who you can talk to,

who will listen.

No matter what you do,

I won't keep you from running.

As your world turns to black,

well I'll be around.

Just don't make a sound.

Chorus:

I know you thought you'd be together forever.

At least you never surrendered.

Your once so strong connection is now at death.

I'll let you just hold your breath, tonight.

As we come to the blue hour of your darkest day,

just realize I'll be here for you everyday.

Verse 2:

She told you she'd be there till the end.

If you had turned around

you'd know that I was your friend.

When you would kiss goodnight,

you never knew that I was right.

Your heart will not bleed for eternity.

I'll save your heart from insanity.

And tonight, I will let you cry.

Chorus

Verse 3:

I hate to say that I was right.

I'm sure you'll run outta tears tonight.

I guess you can't always forgive and forget.

At least now you're surrounded by serenity.

Your heart will not bleed for eternity.

Just know I'm always around.

I won't make a sound.

I won't letyou fall to the ground.

Just be here alone with me now.

Chorus.

That's it! Hope you liked it!

Papa Roach

Daughtry

Velvet Revolver

Guns N' Roses

Motley Crue

Skid Row

Led Zeppelin

AC/DC

Kiss

Poison

Bon Jovi

Ratt

W.A.S.P.

Danzig

Dokken

L.A. Guns

Hollywood Rose

Green Day

The Ramones

The Clash

The Queers

The Misfits

The Cars

Dio

Alice Cooper

Songs also would really help. Thanks :)

It's called THE BLUE HOUR. It's about my best guy friend's ex cheating on him.

Verse 1:

Now that your connection is at death,

you only have a little time to hold your breath,

and say that I was right.

But I'll let you just cry tonight.

You gave her your heart

And she tore it apart.

But I'll be the one who you can talk to,

who will listen.

No matter what you do,

I won't keep you from running.

As your world turns to black,

well I'll be around.

Just don't make a sound.

Chorus:

I know you thought you'd be together forever.

At least you never surrendered.

Your once so strong connection is now at death.

I'll let you just hold your breath, tonight.

As we come to the blue hour of your darkest day,

just realize I'll be here for you everyday.

Verse 2:

She told you she'd be there till the end.

If you had turned around

you'd know that I was your friend.

When you would kiss goodnight,

you never knew that I was right.

Your heart will not bleed for eternity.

I'll save your heart from insanity.

And tonight, I will let you cry.

Chorus

Verse 3:

I hate to say that I was right.

I'm sure you'll run outta tears tonight.

I guess you can't always forgive and forget.

At least now you're surrounded by serenity.

Your heart will not bleed for eternity.

Just know I'm always around.

I won't make a sound.

I won't letyou fall to the ground.

Just be here alone with me now.

Chorus.

That's it! Hope you liked it!

Hey guys. I wrote a new song about my best guy friend's ex cheating on him. I want some opinions and feedback and please be HONEST.

It's called THE BLUE HOUR

verse 1:

Now that your connection is at death,

you only have a little time to hold your breath,

and say that I was right.

But I'll let you cry tonight.

You gave her your heart.

And she tore it apart.

But I'll be the one you can talk to,

who will listen.

No matter what you do,

I won't keep you from running.

As your world is turning black,

well I'll be around.

Just don't make a sound.

Chorus:

I know you thought you'd be together forever.

And at least you never surrendered.

And your once so strong connection is now at death.

I'll let you just hold your breath, tonight.

As we come to the blue hour of your darkest day,

just realize I'll be here for you everyday.

Verse 2:

She told you she'd be there till the end.

But if you'd turned around

you'd know that I was your friend.

But when you would kiss goodnight

you never knew that I was right.

Your heart will not bleed for eternity.

I'll save your heart from insanity.

And tonight, I will let you cry.

Chorus.

Verse 3:

I hate to say that I was right.

I'm sure you'll run outta tears tonight.

I guess you can't always forgive and forget.

At least now you're surrounded by serenity.

Your heart will not bleed for eternity.

Just know I'm always around.

I won't make a sound.

I won't let you fall to the ground.

Just be with me now.

Chorus.

That's it!!!!!! If you can relate to the song, share your story with me please!! Thanks for reading.

Hey, guys. I posted this a couple of times, but I want more feedback. It's called BLACK RAIN. It's a dark, moody song, and I'm already playing guitar with it! Any advice, tips, critique, criticism. is kindly appreciated.

Verse 1:

There is nothing but rain pouring down.

If I go out I'll only drown.

The sky is ebony black,

if I leave now I'll never come back.

As the thunder kicks in,

it only weakens,

doesn't get stronger.

Chorus:

It always comes back as depression.

The only confession,

that keeps coming back to you.

Death will approach you.

But that won't be for a long long time.

I promise you,

I guarantee you,

you'll be fine.

Verse 2:

As the water from the sky turns to black rain

It's a far cry for us to blame.

I see tears

Running down your face.

So let's get outta here.

go to a brand new place.

Chorus (2x)

I've got my bags packed.

I've got my six string on my back.

Never knew the difference

Between a lover and a fighter.

But I know the truth

I know the lyer.

It's only black rain

Please don't cry

Don't go insane.

Love the black rain

There's no one for us to blame.

That's it!! I write songs because I love music, but it's really cool to help people. If you wanna interpret it personally for yourself, that would be awesome!!