What do you think of my lyrics?

It's called THE BLUE HOUR. It's about my best guy friend's ex cheating on him.

Verse 1:

Now that your connection is at death,

you only have a little time to hold your breath,

and say that I was right.

But I'll let you just cry tonight.

You gave her your heart

And she tore it apart.

But I'll be the one who you can talk to,

who will listen.

No matter what you do,

I won't keep you from running.

As your world turns to black,

well I'll be around.

Just don't make a sound.

Chorus:

I know you thought you'd be together forever.

At least you never surrendered.

Your once so strong connection is now at death.

I'll let you just hold your breath, tonight.

As we come to the blue hour of your darkest day,

just realize I'll be here for you everyday.

Verse 2:

She told you she'd be there till the end.

If you had turned around

you'd know that I was your friend.

When you would kiss goodnight,

you never knew that I was right.

Your heart will not bleed for eternity.

I'll save your heart from insanity.

And tonight, I will let you cry.

Chorus

Verse 3:

I hate to say that I was right.

I'm sure you'll run outta tears tonight.

I guess you can't always forgive and forget.

At least now you're surrounded by serenity.

Your heart will not bleed for eternity.

Just know I'm always around.

I won't make a sound.

I won't letyou fall to the ground.

Just be here alone with me now.

Chorus.

That's it! Hope you liked it!