What Do You Think Of My Lyrics?

It's called CATCH ME IF YOU CAN. I really want some feedback. It's a rock song.

Verse 1:

Ir's holding me spellbound.

Enthralled by the sound.

In my own fantasies and dreams.

Try to get away from a living hell.

I know the music is what feelings sound like.

And my feelings are dark melodies.

Somebody told me,

what I write is Black Chromatic.

My darkest feelings are optimistic.

And if I never make it,

my life would be a nervous breakdown.

Chorus:

So will you catch me if you can?

And let my music take a stand?

Will you understand, who I am?

And why my songs are what I sing?

And why it means so much to me?

So catch me if you can.

Verse 2:

When words fail, music speaks.

Either way I'm only me.

I could strum my guitar.

I could play that busted and burned piano.

But I won't swallow my words.

I'll sing them out.

And I won't let you put words up in my mouth.

I won't runaway from my dreams.

I'll let out all my screams.

And if I never make it,

my life would be a nervous breakdown.

Chorus.

Verse 3:

Everytime I'm about to concise,

I realize,

I can't be who you want me to be.

If I don't benefit your needs,

then don't take me.

Chorus.

That's it! If you wanna see some of my other songs here are the links:

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