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What Do You Think Of My Lyrics?

It's called CATCH ME IF YOU CAN. I really want some feedback. It's a rock song.

Verse 1:

Ir's holding me spellbound.

Enthralled by the sound.

In my own fantasies and dreams.

Try to get away from a living hell.

I know the music is what feelings sound like.

And my feelings are dark melodies.

Somebody told me,

what I write is Black Chromatic.

My darkest feelings are optimistic.

And if I never make it,

my life would be a nervous breakdown.

Chorus:

So will you catch me if you can?

And let my music take a stand?

Will you understand, who I am?

And why my songs are what I sing?

And why it means so much to me?

So catch me if you can.

Verse 2:

When words fail, music speaks.

Either way I'm only me.

I could strum my guitar.

I could play that busted and burned piano.

But I won't swallow my words.

I'll sing them out.

And I won't let you put words up in my mouth.

I won't runaway from my dreams.

I'll let out all my screams.

And if I never make it,

my life would be a nervous breakdown.

Chorus.

Verse 3:

Everytime I'm about to concise,

I realize,

I can't be who you want me to be.

If I don't benefit your needs,

then don't take me.

Chorus.

4 Answers

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  • 1 decade ago
    Favorite Answer

    Ha Awesome, really like it, very deep and meaningful, original indeed!

    Tho i would wish to hear the tone and how your voice would compliment the lyrics... anywayz good luck, 'cause you rock at what you do (;

  • 1 decade ago

    Could use some minor editing, but I think it would make a great rock/metal song (sort of a cross between Within Temptation and Nightwish).

  • Lv 6
    1 decade ago

    Not bad. I just don't understand what you're trying to say when it's like:

    "Everytime I'm about to concise,"

    The word "concise" is an adjective, not a verb so I don't exactly know what you mean by that line.

  • 1 decade ago

    thats really good. make a beat/ track to it so i know how it goes...

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