What Do You Think of My Lyrics?

I wrote a song called "Catch Me If You Can" but it didn't fit right so I wrote another one with the same title and I like this one better. I want honest feedback. Thanks.

Verse 1:

When you're running in a field to the rainbows

what you're really running in is the shadows.

You're running away to fast.

You gotta first heal the past.

You could live your life all on your own.

But it's not easy being all alone.

If you turn around

you'll see what's suffocating you is

no one has made amends or apologized.

Holding it in will not help you realize

Chorus:

No one said life is gonna be fair.

You have to face what's real

Your fairytale is a little to twisted.

Running away from your past is like telling it

Catch Me if you can.

Don't bury your head in the sand.

Please don't catch me if you can.

Verse 2:

When you have dreams ready to unfold,

but you don't wanna listen to what you've been told,

Well that rainbow is at the end of the road

and there is not pot of gold.

As your tears turn into fire that the ice can't melt,

is this a feeling you've ever felt?

You're running away too fast.

You gotta first heal the past.

Chorus.

Verse 3:

Can you fix the damage that's been done?

Even though you know you weren't the one?

Could you see how far you can come?

When fire melts the ice

can you realize

you need them to make amends.

Running away from a broken heart.

Running away from a broken home.

Running away from the lighting

that striked your only hope.

Chorus (2x)

Running away from a broken heart.

Running away from a broken home.

Running away from the lighting

that striked your only hope....

Catch Me if you can.

That's it! It's a rock song. And this really came from my heart.