What Do You Think of My Lyrics?

It's called "Can't Die Tonight". It's a rock song.

Verse 1:

As I pick the petals from a forget me not,

I realize we consumed all the time we had.

A moonbeam in a dark night sky.

There was some good, there was some bad.

We'll never wanna remember

how it fell apart,

how it came to discard.

Chorus:

It scurried like a life ending fast.

Gotta move on, stop living in the past.

The sorrow came around seasonal.

Are we gonna remember this tomorrow?

Can the moon give a little more light?

This just can't die tonight.

Verse 2:

As I sit here and give a lot of thought,

I wish I was so forgetful.

Is there a reason I'm not remorseful?

It was so strained.

But I'm feeling off guard and careless.

We could reform but what would we obtain?

Chorus.

Verse 3:

When it was captive,

it was never loose, always tight.

When we had let them know,

it vanished out of sight.

Can the moon give a little more light?

This just Can't die tonight.

Chorus.

Verse 4:

The forget me not,

I'll keep it with me forever.

Even when I don't wanna remember.

Will you keep me in sight?

This just can't die tonight.

No....this just can't die tonight.

So what do you think? Feedback and criticism would help :)