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Do You Like My New Country Song?

Before I post the lyrics I just want to say I'm sorry for going inactive on you guys. -sorry.

ARTIST: JON MALCOM

TITLE: GIVE ME FIVE

I feel like crying

But I know it won’t help

I know my hearts breaking

And I’m going through hell

Before you slam that door and walk out my life

Remember walking out aint always the best thing to try

Maybe for a second put yourself in my shoes

Start thinking of me and stop thinking of you

I know sometimes I make you cry

Please understand, I’m just a guy

Some of what you said really hurt me bad

The yelling and the tears there aint much more to add

But I wish I could go back in time

I’m begging you please just give me five

I’d try to not say everything I said

And everything else God forbid

I’m sorry

When this day started it didn’t start like this

You woke up beside me and you gave me a kiss

But like everything else in this world

Problems close in on a boy and a girl

But I wish I could go back in time

I’m begging you please just give me five

I’d try to not say everything I said

And everything else God forbid

Baby-I’m sorry

There’s twenty-four hours in one day

Everything goes wrong in twenty-four ways

All I’m asking is just five

Save our love and save my life

But I wish I could go back in time

I’m begging you please just give me five

I’d try to not say everything I said

And everything else God forbid

Baby-I’m sorry

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  • Yamila
    Lv 4
    1 decade ago
    Favorite Answer

    I love it just as I love all your other lyrics. For me my favorite part of the song is of course the chorus, but also the phrases "Problems close in on a boy and a girl" and "There’s twenty-four hours in one day Everything goes wrong in twenty-four ways". Those were my personal faves. I would love to hear how the song actually goes with all the background music and rhythm because you might see this peace and read it one way and we might read it another way that has a different tune to it. So I'm looking forward to listening to all your wonderful lyrics and the music that goes with it. Great Job :)

  • 1 decade ago

    I like the lyrics, i think it's pretty good. I like the repeat of the chorus, thats usually repeated twice or three times in a song depending on how long the song is. I like that he is trying to get a second chance, I think there are alot of songs out there like that.

    It's a good start

  • ?
    Lv 4
    5 years ago

    Hold me Like the River Jordan And I will then say to thee You are my buddy Carry me Like you're my brother Love me like a mom Will you be there Oh, love Weary Tell me, will you keep me When incorrect will you scold me When misplaced will you uncover me But they instructed me A guy must be faithfull And stroll while no longer competent And battle 'til the tip But I'm best human Michael Jackson "Will you be there" Ill Sing it to the Mirror Or wait is it Man within the Mirror Nah Ill sing that when.

  • .
    Lv 6
    1 decade ago

    i like the lyrics its really nice!

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  • GHau
    Lv 4
    1 decade ago

    Nice to have you back and great work!

  • 1 decade ago

    uve really got a talent! ;)

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