help with ENG 101 homework?

Punctuation corrections only (well, a few word usage corrections):

In chapter one, “The Process Of Writing “, gives us a basic foundation of how to clearly convey a specific topic, idea, or opinion through writing by using a few essential elements. Once you have written a rough draft, it is important that you revise your paper to ensure that the body of your paper supports the thesis statement. Also, to be sure that the point you are trying to get across is accurate and easy to understand. Next, edit your paper to ensure that your grammar is precise in meaning. Last, but not least, proofread your paper to ensure that it is without flaws (i.e. grammatical errors, etc..).

Unfortunately, you can never tell with some teachers and your paragraph sounds fine overall but you probably could make a few corrections.

There should be a comma after an introductory phrase so a comma should be added after "draft." You could choose a different set of words other than "making sure." Perhaps, "ensuring" or simply rewording the whole sentence. There should be a comma after "last, and after "least." I think you want to pluralize "flaw" to "flaws" and I'm not sure, but I think you want to change the "that" after "flaw" to which and place a comma before it. There needs to be an apostrophe after the "e" in "tee's."

Well, if you are American, the comma needs to be inside the quotation marks for chapter one's title, and I think you need to capitalize the "p" in "process" and the "w" in "writing."

Also, I don't fully understand the scope of the homework. What is the assignment? What should this paragraph convey?

When you say "idea or opinion," is this part of a series? If so, a comma should be after idea (an opinion is always an idea/thought, but an idea is not always an opinion). And don't take all my suggestions as law. This is just what I'd do if it was my paragraph, but again this is with a quick glance and it's 4am where I am. I hope, at least, this helps. good luck.

P.S. The best way to get on an English/any teacher's good side is stay in their office constantly asking for help. That way, you'll know what they're looking for and fix it before you turn it in. Don't worry about looking dumb because any good teacher will help.

In chapter one, “The Process of Writing" gives a basic explanation of how to clearly convey a specific topic, idea or opinion through writing by using a few essential elements. Once the rough draft is written, it is important the draft gets revised. Making sure the body paragraphs support the thesis statement is crucial for a well developed paper. The body paragraphs will state the reasoning of the thesis, these paragraphs must be accurate and clear to the reader. For the last step, proofread the paper, checking for grammatical errors and spelling. This process will help reach the goal in writing a perfect paper.

(hey your welcome, i recommend you talk to your teacher) your probably a freshman in college cause of the 101. Listen i removed alot of mistakes, stop using that and you, your, us) its better your teacher see your mistakes and help you with it. Please let this be the last time, cause believe it or not i was kind of bad in english, and it helps. also in writing just get to the point and dont bullshit in sentences. trust me your teacher will say the same. make sure you use your words right, dont just put them out there cause they look big, its best to keep it simple. i hope you learned. if you want to use my version, be my guest, but next time stick with your own werds and help and let the teacher and experience make you better. Also prepare to write and write and write and write this semester. its gonna come right after the next. Also if you come up with a better ending, go for it. it was just a sample

Well, if you really want to get with your English teacher, writing a grammatically correct essay is not the way to go about doing it. If I were you, I'd start by asking her for help with your homework. You know, ask her to meet you at a cafe, maybe grab lunch or some coffee. In fact, if you include several mistakes it will give you more to talk about over lunch. I think she'll appreciate your effort to learn and it might be empowering for her to teach to you. I'm not saying that you will always be forced into the submissive role, but at least in the beginning, you might prefer this since she is your superior at the English language. Trust me, I've met a lot of tough cookies in my day, and with enough effort you can crack anyone of them. ;-)

your ending sentence could be, " If you follow these simple elements, your writing will become a work of genius" or something along the lines of that.

It seems that the assignment was to state things in order without saying "And then, and then , and, also"

It was well written, but maybe replace "be sure" with something more sophisticated.

English is a wonderful subject, I wish you the best of luck in it. And if your teacher is a tough cookie, put the effort into the small assignments, she will notice =)♥

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It is decent but yeah your right the ending does seem a little, strange. Keep thinking you will get it!

i took that class and got an A i dont know how but just message me on yahoo or email me and i can help

i hope you are under 15 coz that work is bad

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