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An abstract poem. Cause it seems to have no rhythm. and is confusing, i guess. tell me what you think?

"Rivers Run Red”

We are made in his image.

That’s what they say.

From our kind hearts,

To our violent ways.

We show our love,

our passion, our hate.

We even destroy the very

Things we create.

Whether it be machine,

A home,

Or the children we name.

Even the lives we make

In search of some fame.

All left in the dust

Of the riots that rage

In the streets we called home.

And we just look away.

We wage war on our brothers.

Our rivers run red.

As our children fight our battles.

It’s their blood that is shed.

It’s their lives that are lost

Because of mistakes in the past.

It’s their lives that are lost

Because of one name heard so vast.

In gods name we “pray.”

As we wait for the day.

As we wait for our questions

To be answered.

As we wait for our answers

Too many lives are lost.

Enough waiting,

I say,

It’s all a lost cause.

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  • Anonymous
    1 decade ago
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    Nice

    Appreciative

    Motivating

    Full of emotions

    Fastidious

    Enthusiastic

    Stirring

    Jam-packed of sentiments

    Pleasurable

    Gratifying

    Flattering

    Words are less 2 correspond the passion exposed in this poem.

    I beyond doubt appreciate this poem by heart!!!!

    Hope this helps :-))

  • Anonymous
    1 decade ago

    yeah , you're talking about god. poems don't have to rhyme to be considered a poem. i think you did a very good job, i like it very much.

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