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An abstract poem. Cause it seems to have no rhythm. and is confusing, i guess. tell me what you think?
"Rivers Run Red”
We are made in his image.
That’s what they say.
From our kind hearts,
To our violent ways.
We show our love,
our passion, our hate.
We even destroy the very
Things we create.
Whether it be machine,
A home,
Or the children we name.
Even the lives we make
In search of some fame.
All left in the dust
Of the riots that rage
In the streets we called home.
And we just look away.
We wage war on our brothers.
Our rivers run red.
As our children fight our battles.
It’s their blood that is shed.
It’s their lives that are lost
Because of mistakes in the past.
It’s their lives that are lost
Because of one name heard so vast.
In gods name we “pray.”
As we wait for the day.
As we wait for our questions
To be answered.
As we wait for our answers
Too many lives are lost.
Enough waiting,
I say,
It’s all a lost cause.
2 Answers
- Anonymous1 decade agoFavorite Answer
Nice
Appreciative
Motivating
Full of emotions
Fastidious
Enthusiastic
Stirring
Jam-packed of sentiments
Pleasurable
Gratifying
Flattering
Words are less 2 correspond the passion exposed in this poem.
I beyond doubt appreciate this poem by heart!!!!
Hope this helps :-))
- Anonymous1 decade ago
yeah , you're talking about god. poems don't have to rhyme to be considered a poem. i think you did a very good job, i like it very much.