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Feedback on this poem I wrote two years ago....?

"A little lost"

The hour is late and I'm out of clues

My empires desert me into the edge of surf

I check my watch, I check my compass

Neither is of any use to me now

I look to see if I can find the North Star

But the clouds have obscured my view

So I hold my course, not knowing…

Whether safety or disaster lay ahead

"I know this heartache

is a spec in the sky of love..."*

Yet…..

I still feel a little lost.

*bonus points for know where that quote comes from...

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    Excellent - I used to hate poetry but as I have gotten older I have found the beauty in it. I even write some myself.

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