are my poems any good?

here a few of my poems i wrote. i need feed back and opinions. first one-"the princess and her prince"-She wanders alone in the night. Wishing to find her handsome prince. She searches for hours but he is nowhere in sight. She longs to get her true loves kiss. She runs through the trees. She explores the beach. He isnt in his castle so where could he be? Maybe he is too far out of reach. Sad and hurt she goes back home. When she arrives to her castle she sees the prince by her gate. She tells him"I searched the island for you but you were here all along, i should of known" she smiles and tears fill her eyes. The princess finally found her soul mate. Then they kiss and live happily ever after for the rest of thier lives. 2nd -"my angel"- a tear drops from my eye, cold and clear like the winter sky. i wander the gravelled path alone. wandering into the unknown. my sadness engulfes me. i feel so weak. my soul is worn out. i try to speak but nothing comes out of my mouth. i try to walk but i collaspe from pain. im laying here on the ground and it starts to rain. im getting soaked and im going insane. will someone please help me i pray? finally i hear someone whisper "its going to be okay" i am lifted into big arms and i sigh with relief. then i look up at his face and cant believe what i see. its my angel that has come to rescue me. im happy at last. he healed my broken heart. im no longer hurt because he has set me free. -3rd poem-"forever"- baby, do you think of me when your alone? all you have to do is pick up

the phone. and i will be there. just show me that you care. love is not a

two way street. its a one lane road cant you cant you see? why wont you

follow your heart? why dont you give me a sign or is that too hard? when

you close your eyes am i in your dreams? im your princess longing to be

your queen. make my wishes come true. there is nothing that i wouldnt

do for you. our love is like a rainbow in the sky. something so beautiful

words cant describe. its like magic when we touch. the firey passion i

cant get enough. so why wont you tell me you love me? my heart is

aching for you not to leave. my mind is twirling with confusion. i pray

my fear is just a delusion. i need an answer now. take me into your arms

and erase my doubts. tell me are you forever mine? will you love me for

eternity or will i be denied? we will be together always i hope. please i

need to know. you have the key. will you unlock the door and set me free.

how long do i have to wait? im wondering what you will say. i look

above and wish on a star. i wish our love will never part. suddenly i feel a

breeze. and i look to find you behind me. im exicted you finally came. i

hear a boom and i feel rain splash on my face. i dont know what to say im

just amazed. i didnt think you'd come. as you pull me close you whiper

that im the one. our lips meet and i feel a spark of heat. as you embrace

me im finally at peace. our love is stronger than ever. now i finally know

that your truly mine forever. 4th-"will you ever know"-what would you say if i said i love you? would you run away? or say i always wanted you to be my baby? would you hold me in your arms? or shove me very far? would you look me in the eyes and say im beautiful? or look at me pitiful? will i ever tell you how i feel? that the love i have for you is real? will you ever know? or will my love for you go untold? i hope that we can be together one day. if only there was a way. my heart belongs to you. if only you knew.5th-"will i ever"-i'm looking at the moon and the stars, wondering where you are. will i ever meet you? or is it just a silly fanasty dream that will never come true? will you ever get the chance to be with me? or am i just delusional thinking what will never be? i wish so bad that we are together one day. when its raining i think of you with a hopeful smile on my face. and then other times tears fill my eyes knowing what might never happen to me. i feel like im going crazy. not knowing makes me upset. but then i make myself snap out of it. i dont know, who's to say, maybe it will, and the time hasn't just came yet. 6th-"lonely soul"-tears fall down my face, i will never know true love. my heart is a empty place. i used to care about finding the right one. but now i feel so cold and alone. i used to wish upon the stars that i will find my soul mate. but now all i feel is hate. my heart was once filled with love and joy. but its been broken like a toy. i will protect myself. i will not look anymore. i used to dream of being with that special someone. i'd think of them and my heart would melt. now my heart has hardened and turned to stone. now i will be just another lonely soul. 7th-"spark of eternity"-when you pull me close i gasp and get excited. and when our hands touch i feel this spark that runs through my body and a flame has iginited. i'm looking into your beautiful eyes and i just don't know what to say. as our lips me