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Does this sound interesting????

I'm writing a story called Falling for You. It's about a 16 year old girl named Alyson Bloom but they call her Aly. Aly has a twin sister named Nina and a mother named Ara. Aly's father died before she was born, so she never knew him. Also, Aly, Nina, and Ara are witches. Aly's family moves to a new town after someone discovers that they are witches and Aly meets Benjamin Carter, but people call him Ben. Aly wants to tell Ben what she is, but she doesn't want to get in trouble, so she's torn. What do you think.

Update:

Also, do you like the names:

Alyson "Aly"

Nina

Ara

Benjamin "Ben"

and Justin????

Update 2:

I could Answerer 1, but people would think I'm copying Twilight with the Twilight craze going on....

Update 3:

Oh, and also, the mother killed the father and Aly kills her in the end.... does that make it les Twitchesy... and I've seen both of the movies... they aren't similar besides the whole twin witch concept. The twins were never seperated....

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  • i thought the story was interesting and it has nothing to do with twilight! Just because it is something supernatural it doesn't mean it looks like twilight!! Maybe the story is similar to twitches so try to watch the movie if you haven't done it yet and then try to keep your story different from it :)

  • ?
    Lv 5
    1 decade ago

    It sounds like Sabrina the Teenage Witch, to be honest.

  • 1 decade ago

    Yeah, it sounds good.

    Keep them witches. Not vampires. Vampires are icky.

  • 1 decade ago

    it sounds exactly like twilight, to be completely honest with you.

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  • 1 decade ago

    hm.. well jst dnt make them turn to vampires :D

  • Anonymous
    1 decade ago

    Yeaaah, it sounds good but too make it even better.. maybe you could change the whitches to vampires? :)

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