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Do You Like My New Country Song?
I have been thinking about writing this for awhile and the words came to me one night, sadly I didn't write them down. The good thing is the next day I still remembered the words and here is what I had. Hope you like it and tell me if you didn't or did and why.
TITLE: YOUR KISS
ARTIST: JON MALCOM
I open my eyes through the blinding sun
Thinking about last nights fun
Running hand in hand through the city streets
And then you stopped and looked at me
CHORUS:
It's your deep blue eyes
Your curly blond hair
The way you laugh and the way you care
The way you walk when you walk by
Getting looks from every guy
But the best thing about all of this...is your kiss
Girl I remember the first time we met
It was on a stupid bet
Your girlfriends said go that guy
I couldn't stop smiling after you said hi
And the moments after that have been the best moments of my life
CHORUS
Because:
It's your deep blue eyes
Your curly blond hair
The way you laugh and the way you care
The way you walk when you walk by
Getting looks from every guy
But the best thing about all of this...is your kiss
It's all been so many years ago
I got down on one knee and you didn't say no
So everyday I get up and your by my side
I'm so happy to tell the love of my life that's it's
CHORUS:
It's your deep blue eyes
Your curly blond hair
The way you laugh and the way you care
The way you walk when you walk by
Getting looks from every guy
But the best thing about all of this...is your kiss
3 Answers
- 1 decade agoFavorite Answer
I read the first two verses i thought it was pointless but i liked it
- GHauLv 41 decade ago
You know what Jon/Alex? I only answer your questions when I really like them or really hate them. Usually if it's just okay I pass on answering. This one... I like, very much so.
- 1 decade ago
KEEP WORKING ON IT AND KEEP TRYING TO WRITE SONGS BUT REMEMBER IF YOU HAVE NO COPY WRITE ANY ONE CAN USE IT. SO BE AWARE
Source(s): SONGWRITER