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Do You Like My New Country Song?

I have been thinking about writing this for awhile and the words came to me one night, sadly I didn't write them down. The good thing is the next day I still remembered the words and here is what I had. Hope you like it and tell me if you didn't or did and why.

TITLE: YOUR KISS

ARTIST: JON MALCOM

I open my eyes through the blinding sun

Thinking about last nights fun

Running hand in hand through the city streets

And then you stopped and looked at me

CHORUS:

It's your deep blue eyes

Your curly blond hair

The way you laugh and the way you care

The way you walk when you walk by

Getting looks from every guy

But the best thing about all of this...is your kiss

Girl I remember the first time we met

It was on a stupid bet

Your girlfriends said go that guy

I couldn't stop smiling after you said hi

And the moments after that have been the best moments of my life

CHORUS

Because:

It's your deep blue eyes

Your curly blond hair

The way you laugh and the way you care

The way you walk when you walk by

Getting looks from every guy

But the best thing about all of this...is your kiss

It's all been so many years ago

I got down on one knee and you didn't say no

So everyday I get up and your by my side

I'm so happy to tell the love of my life that's it's

CHORUS:

It's your deep blue eyes

Your curly blond hair

The way you laugh and the way you care

The way you walk when you walk by

Getting looks from every guy

But the best thing about all of this...is your kiss

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  • 1 decade ago
    Favorite Answer

    I read the first two verses i thought it was pointless but i liked it

  • GHau
    Lv 4
    1 decade ago

    You know what Jon/Alex? I only answer your questions when I really like them or really hate them. Usually if it's just okay I pass on answering. This one... I like, very much so.

  • 1 decade ago

    KEEP WORKING ON IT AND KEEP TRYING TO WRITE SONGS BUT REMEMBER IF YOU HAVE NO COPY WRITE ANY ONE CAN USE IT. SO BE AWARE

    Source(s): SONGWRITER
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