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paul s
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paul s asked in Arts & HumanitiesPoetry · 1 decade ago

An opinion please on this couplet?

We call to one another across the abyss of time,

Our fading voices becoming distant screams and desperate prayers.

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  • 1 decade ago
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    And though a couplet needs to rhyme,

    It's fine 'cause no one really cares.

    A couplet is in this format:

    My little kitten purred and rumbled

    oh, the thunder pounded.

    My snobby brother sure was humbled

    oh, the purrs it sounded.

    "Shrieking Shiver" make me Quiver, hence, I love your couplet.

  • Anonymous
    1 decade ago

    good. very good.

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