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Do You Like My New Song?
I have been thinking about writing this for awhile and the words came to me one night, sadly I didn't write them down. The good thing is the next day I still remembered the words and here is what I had. Hope you like it and tell me if you didn't or did and why.
TITLE: YOUR KISS
ARTIST: JON MALCOM
I open my eyes through the blinding sun
Thinking about last nights fun
Running hand in hand through the city streets
And then you stopped and looked at me
CHORUS:
It's your deep blue eyes
Your curly blond hair
The way you laugh and the way you care
The way you walk when you walk by
Getting looks from every guy
But the best thing about all of this...is your kiss
Girl I remember the first time we met
It was on a stupid bet
Your girlfriends said go that guy
I couldn't stop smiling after you said hi
And the moments after that have been the best moments of my life
CHORUS
Because:
It's your deep blue eyes
Your curly blond hair
The way you laugh and the way you care
The way you walk when you walk by
Getting looks from every guy
But the best thing about all of this...is your kiss
It's all been so many years ago
I got down on one knee and you didn't say no
So everyday I get up and your by my side
I'm so happy to tell the love of my life that's it's
CHORUS:
It's your deep blue eyes
Your curly blond hair
The way you laugh and the way you care
The way you walk when you walk by
Getting looks from every guy
But the best thing about all of this...is your kiss
4 Answers
- KeroseneLv 71 decade agoFavorite Answer
It's pretty good! I would just fix the line that says ''Your girlfriends said go that guy"
- Anonymous1 decade ago
If you could set it to some good music, maybe. It wouldn't appeal to me because I have red hair and brown eyes and I wouldn't relate. I hate songs about blue-eyed girls and I have all my life.
I would change the line "Your girlfriends said go that guy" to "your friends said he's your guy" because that line doesn't make sense.
- 1 decade ago
ok i SERIOUSLY like it. its like really good in my opinion i dont know what those other people are talkin bout. i do think that one line should be changed bout the "go that guy" thing thats it but other than that i ADORE IT keep writin you got a knack for it. :D