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Is it a good poem......!!?? please be honest?

my poem is published in a online magazine but i think that it's not a good poem. What are your thoughts??

http://www.teenink.com/poetry/all/article/134413/I...

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  • 1 decade ago
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    WOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

  • 1 decade ago

    You're right it isn't very good, still most poetry isn't very good.

    I have written dozens and only one or two have any depth of character to really move people and retain value beyond on initial reading.

    If you enjoy poetry keep writing and when something moves you truly deeply you will find that this will fall onto the page and the reader will detect it.

    Good luck

  • 1 decade ago

    You are from India, hai na? You poem is really sweet, dear! Its touching! Would you like 2 be my friend, dear?

  • 1 decade ago

    'its you, only you' sounds like it's addressed to a lover, not a sister.

    Other than that, pretty generic, Hallmark card stuff.

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  • Anonymous
    1 decade ago

    Its all right... nothing that gets the average man excited... but its written pretty well...

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